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Drip, Drop

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Drip, Drop

Drip

Drop

Water drop cascades under sapphire afterglow
Undoing 4 month deprivations

Muffled moans surround crimson fireplace

Crackling of fire
Thrusts of skin
Retinal vibrations shutter her pilot light deep within

She ascended to blue moon heights
As embers of his inferno
Bow in collective unison

Maddening grips

His fingertips draw triangular markings
Hugging curvature’s hip

Gentle bites on lower lip
He tackles her wanton hands against waterbed foundations

Her strengthened pupils reach out for 3rd eye clarity.

She asks for his dance under aggressive whisper
As he dips
Inside

Slow motion Salsa bends of her will
She crosses legs marking “X” against his spot

His relinquished hands
Slalom her vocal chords toward accentuated heavens

He exorcised her trembling inner thighs
From collapsing octaves

With eloquent, muted exhales
His hand reaches her cheek
His mouth descending towards her breast

“My lady, put that lighter down,
Let me be your cigarette.”

Drip

Drop

©11/19/2013
A Scorcher for Charlotte's contest. (Update: Tied for 2nd place. Nice!)

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  1. Date: 7/15/2014 11:25:00 AM
    Whew! This one's Hott!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/15/2014 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) KATIE! Hi & thank you!
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Oh YES, I fully expected to see THIS one on the winners list. BIG congrats

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much, Andrea. :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:18:00 AM
    I knew this would be a winner. Damn fine writing... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I kindly appreciate that, Jack. :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:53:00 AM
    An excellent passionate poem my dear friend Drake. Thank u so much for sharing & my biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you, Leonora! Cheers to you too! =)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:22:00 PM
    I'm not at all surprised that this did so well in the contest!! Ouch !!!! So hot It burned me again !!! lol !!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And you, my dear, got 1st place which was entirely well deserving. Thank you so much for that, Carrie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your smoking hot poetry D, xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Puff puff. =) Thank you, Vie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:26:00 PM
    hot stuff Drake congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm very glad you enjoyed, Shadow. :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Not surprised to see you here! Congratulations Drake..:-) :-) :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Donna. You're very kind. :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:40:00 PM
    How could it not win ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =) That's sweet. Thank you, Debbie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:26:00 PM
    a most impressive modernistic free verse poem here, drake, great innovative use of language - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome. Hi & thank you very much, Charlotte. It was an enjoyable contest.
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Wanton hands and aggressive whispers for his dance.... Awesomeness!!!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/5/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Absolutely!!! =D Hi & thank you so much, Bindu!
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 4:58:00 PM
    Is this for the scorching contest..You re burning the page.Passionate..ardent..effervescent..and excellent.Charlotte pls get your fire extnguisher : ) : )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/1/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL, so cute. Yes, this is for the contest. Thank you so much, Charmaine!
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Hi Drake, came over to see if you have a new offering. I hope your day is going well.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tomorrow I'll have something. :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:04:00 PM
    you got mall !..:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I responded. ;-)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 6:57:00 AM
    what a picture painted with your words great write!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/29/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you much, Joe!
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Somemore great comments Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/27/2013 10:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agreed! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:06:00 PM
    All this ecstasy is making me ecstatic ! Bev

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/26/2013 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome. Yay for ecstasy! =) Thank you much, Beverly!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:02:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your verse this afternoon. Now I need a cold shower ;) Light & Love

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/26/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Debbie! :) Ha, enjoy your shower! Thanks very much!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Love the "crime noir" ending! And thanks for stopping by....felt yer disbelief Sun! I tried 1//1/1/1 to let you connect me, to no avail! Good thing the first time, my mouth wuz full of gold potatoes fried in Italian Olive Oil with Chili Peppers! Happy Thanksgiving, my dear friend! Jimbo

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/26/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    JIMBO, SIR!!! =D Thank you so much for that & for your understanding too! =) LOL, full of gold potatoes? I'd have LOVED to have heard that. Happy Gobble Day to you too!!!
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Haha...OMG...I'm seriously laughing my *** off over what nette said about needing a smoke!!!! It's that HHOOTT ...SMOOKKIINN!!!! Could enter this in the playin' with fire one too!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/26/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! Fire can be fun...in very , very small & contained doses. :) Thank you so much, Donna.
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