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Drip, Drop

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Drip, Drop

Drip

Drop

Water drop cascades under sapphire afterglow
Undoing 4 month deprivations

Muffled moans surround crimson fireplace

Crackling of fire
Thrusts of skin
Retinal vibrations shutter her pilot light deep within

She ascended to blue moon heights
As embers of his inferno
Bow in collective unison

Maddening grips

His fingertips draw triangular markings
Hugging curvature’s hip

Gentle bites on lower lip
He tackles her wanton hands against waterbed foundations

Her strengthened pupils reach out for 3rd eye clarity.

She asks for his dance under aggressive whisper
As he dips
Inside

Slow motion Salsa bends of her will
She crosses legs marking “X” against his spot

His relinquished hands
Slalom her vocal chords toward accentuated heavens

He exorcised her trembling inner thighs
From collapsing octaves

With eloquent, muted exhales
His hand reaches her cheek
His mouth descending towards her breast

“My lady, put that lighter down,
Let me be your cigarette.”

Drip

Drop

©11/19/2013
A Scorcher for Charlotte's contest. (Update: Tied for 2nd place. Nice!)

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Oh YES, I fully expected to see THIS one on the winners list. BIG congrats

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much, Andrea. :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:18:00 AM

    I knew this would be a winner. Damn fine writing... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/9/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I kindly appreciate that, Jack. :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:53:00 AM

    An excellent passionate poem my dear friend Drake. Thank u so much for sharing & my biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & thank you, Leonora! Cheers to you too! =)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:22:00 PM

    I'm not at all surprised that this did so well in the contest!! Ouch !!!! So hot It burned me again !!! lol !!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And you, my dear, got 1st place which was entirely well deserving. Thank you so much for that, Carrie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your smoking hot poetry D, xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Puff puff. =) Thank you, Vie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:26:00 PM

    hot stuff Drake congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm very glad you enjoyed, Shadow. :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:19:00 PM

    Not surprised to see you here! Congratulations Drake..:-) :-) :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Donna. You're very kind. :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:40:00 PM

    How could it not win ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =) That's sweet. Thank you, Debbie.
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:26:00 PM

    a most impressive modernistic free verse poem here, drake, great innovative use of language - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awesome. Hi & thank you very much, Charlotte. It was an enjoyable contest.
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 11:37:00 PM

    Wanton hands and aggressive whispers for his dance.... Awesomeness!!!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/5/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Absolutely!!! =D Hi & thank you so much, Bindu!
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 4:58:00 PM

    Is this for the scorching contest..You re burning the page.Passionate..ardent..effervescent..and excellent.Charlotte pls get your fire extnguisher : ) : )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/1/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL, so cute. Yes, this is for the contest. Thank you so much, Charmaine!
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Hi Drake, came over to see if you have a new offering. I hope your day is going well.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tomorrow I'll have something. :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:04:00 PM

    you got mall !..:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I responded. ;-)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 6:57:00 AM

    what a picture painted with your words great write!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/29/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & thank you much, Joe!
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Somemore great comments Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/27/2013 10:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Agreed! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:06:00 PM

    All this ecstasy is making me ecstatic ! Bev

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/26/2013 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awesome. Yay for ecstasy! =) Thank you much, Beverly!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:02:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your verse this afternoon. Now I need a cold shower ;) Light & Love

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/26/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Debbie! :) Ha, enjoy your shower! Thanks very much!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Love the "crime noir" ending! And thanks for stopping by....felt yer disbelief Sun! I tried 1//1/1/1 to let you connect me, to no avail! Good thing the first time, my mouth wuz full of gold potatoes fried in Italian Olive Oil with Chili Peppers! Happy Thanksgiving, my dear friend! Jimbo

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/26/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    JIMBO, SIR!!! =D Thank you so much for that & for your understanding too! =) LOL, full of gold potatoes? I'd have LOVED to have heard that. Happy Gobble Day to you too!!!
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 7:11:00 PM

    Haha...OMG...I'm seriously laughing my *** off over what nette said about needing a smoke!!!! It's that HHOOTT ...SMOOKKIINN!!!! Could enter this in the playin' with fire one too!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/26/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! Fire can be fun...in very , very small & contained doses. :) Thank you so much, Donna.
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 11:59:00 AM

    SIMPLY AMAZING!! And thanks for commenting on my poem too! You are so talented Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/25/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, Elissa!! You stopped by! Very cool of you! =D Thanks very much!
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 2:00:00 AM

    oooo man, wish I could read it forever with no ending. awesome pictures painted in here. oo yee and thanx for the visit on my poetry. much appreciated. Salute.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/25/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Indeed, Raymond! =) Thanks very much sir!
  1. Date: 11/24/2013 8:55:00 PM

    oh my Drake...this one was like foreplay at it's finest...teasing through your sensual images...luring the reader in...wow... I see this one hitting the winner's list for sure!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/25/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yay for foreplay!!! =D Whether it wins or not, it affected everybody who commented here. I'm entirely ok with that. :) Thank you so much, Sandra!
  1. Date: 11/24/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Hey, Drake, you know we're a bunch of single ladies on here. This is pure torture, my friend. WHEW!!!! I'm faving this one to read over and over again. Greedy, huh? Licia :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/24/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! Is that so? I have met (not personally of course) only two single ladies here. Maybe the others are just saying they're not single so I don't approach them? lol Either way, thank you so much. I'm grateful for that. =D
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 2:18:00 PM

    Wowza! It just got very HOT in here. So vivid and intense I felt like a peeping creeper. Truly amazing Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is just an awesome thing to read. =) Here's a bucket of cold water for you. Thanks so much, Sarai.
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:39:00 AM

    Um..............yea! I'd comment, but I'm...SHY! Bits lower lip! ;) ;) Bits that I liked....I'll keep to myself..but sizzle sizzle sizzle.....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! Right, Eileen...right... =P Thanks very much!
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Enjoying the fun comments, I also enjoyed rereading this beauty. Have a great weekend Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola & thanks again, Richard!
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 8:58:00 AM

    You zipped right past scorcher to a three alarm. Call out the fire brigades!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! The roof is on fire! =D Great to see you here, Monterey!
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 12:03:00 AM

    This is one serious sizzler, my friend. Smokin' Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many, many thanks, Jack! =D
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 10:23:00 PM

    wow, now that IS a scorcher indeed!! WELL DONE!!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Splendid. :) Thank you, Andrea.
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Hi Drake, Awesome sizzling write! Well done.. Ken

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 11/23/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Ken! I appreciate that. :) Thanks so much!
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