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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Hello Gail...this does describe a very sad Christmas indeed...lovely writing..I hope you and yours have a happy wonderful Christmas...:-) :-)

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Hello, gail. I am happy to see it was you that wrote this not so happy holiday poem!! Congrats for your win. I liked the imagery and really enjoyed that final line.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:38:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Stunning images of the depth of pain when falling tears break glass. Love this one.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:23:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Gail...

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:23:00 AM
    Congratulations Gail love xx

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 9:53:00 AM
    This has a delicate touch of pure sadness, the heart fells the melancholy for the ones we miss, well said my friend, I hope your keeping well, xxx

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Hi Gail, Much said in such few words..Nicely done.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:00:00 PM
    very interesting. I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
    wow, you did this so well Gail,,good luck

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
    raking piece so beautifully penned , gail.. the shattering of glass did it ... packed with deep sentiments!...:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:57:00 AM
    Very sad but impressive way to express it, Gail

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:54:00 PM
    nice tanka wishes in the contest....hugs

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:39:00 PM
    This is a very awesome write my friend! I am quite impressed by the way you interwove the emotions all together through the poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! Great Work!!