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Introduction to a Goddess of Old Soho

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Introduction to a Goddess of Old Soho

She slipped into the single’s club, where an assortment of horny guys and lonely hearts had assembled. Some were there hoping to find that "special" someone and some had come to chase away the blues, tinkling ice in cocktail glasses soon to be refilled. Others, who might be labeled commitment phobic, had simply come to case the place for an easy lay. Swinging svelte, mini-skirted hips lasciviously, she strutted over to the counter on legs that looked their longest and most shapely from being hoisted on high red heels. Every pair of eyes was trained on her. Some in the club gawked with eyes that hid beneath mascara-painted lashes, flitting envy. Others leered with pupils dilating lust from ogling the two soft protrusions in her tight white turtleneck. Then with pink champagne in hand, the goddess turned and surveyed her audience, most of whom by now had looked away. One remained, mesmerized, with eyes riveted on her. He quivered when she caught his gaze and strolled over to where he sat. As she approached, he marveled at her face - the chiseled cheekbones strong and high, the dark eyes, luminescent and immense, and curiously, an upturned nose so delicate it seemed almost too perfect, like one acquired from a sculptor’s hands. He gulped when she asked him for a dance, and as he asked this intriguing lady’s name, he wondered at the timbre of her voice, so provocative and low as she tossed dark brown locks and said seductively, “My name is Lola. L-O-L-A , Lola.” Inspired by an old song from the 70's and used now for the girl's Night Out Contest of Darren Watson

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  1. Date: 6/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
    sweet win...pd

  1. Date: 6/7/2014 9:39:00 PM
    Andrea, where is chapter two?? Your ability to skillfully tell a compelling story is second to none. Your write is at home here at the top, congrats!

  1. Date: 6/6/2014 5:30:00 PM
    You had me hooked! what a story, I can see it to perfection, I love the way you write, you are the perfect painter of words, Well done :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2014 4:48:00 PM
    Ahhhh such creativity! Immensely enjoyed; did not want it to end! Can well remember The Kinks and Lola who was a transvestite. // Congrats on a deserved top podium. // paul

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 7:01:00 AM
    Such a beautiful, creative, and enjoyable write. Congratulations on another well-deserved win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 5:11:00 AM
    Brilliant - a well deserved winner! hugs Jan xxx

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 11:29:00 PM
    Oh No! Not Lola, L-O-L-A, Lola! Loved it. I think we were thinking along the same humorous lines about a transvestite.

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 6:07:00 PM
    Congrats on a great much deserved win, Andrea!... I can see her so vividly!.... Arlene..

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 10:51:00 AM
    wonderful write and congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 10:25:00 AM
    Wonderful descriptions with clever words choices. As always. :)

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 9:00:00 AM
    A superb poem which deserved its superb win! My hearty congratulations my dearest friend Andrea! Hugs and cheers! love much always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 8:28:00 AM
    I love it Andrea! Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 7:17:00 AM
    A truly fantastic write my friend!!! Huge congrats on the win!!!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 5:14:00 AM
    Thats an awesome write indeed Andrea ,, worthy of top win ! congrats !

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 4:46:00 AM
    An oldie but gooooooooooooooooooooooooooodie. Congrats Andrea!

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 12:31:00 AM
    Great poem Andrea, congrats ....Seren

  1. Date: 6/3/2014 11:31:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS! Andrea, quite an imagination... Verlena

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Andrea, love it..... Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:19:00 AM
    I loved this one when IO read it earlier. Fine writing! Congratulations... Jack

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:41:00 AM
    An excellent poem to the max my dear friend Andrea! So love it and thoroughly enjoyed! Thank u so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! Biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora

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