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Introduction to a Goddess of Old Soho

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Introduction to a Goddess of Old Soho

She slipped into the single’s club, where an assortment of horny guys and lonely hearts had assembled. Some were there hoping to find that "special" someone and some had come to chase away the blues, tinkling ice in cocktail glasses soon to be refilled. Others, who might be labeled commitment phobic, had simply come to case the place for an easy lay. Swinging svelte, mini-skirted hips lasciviously, she strutted over to the counter on legs that looked their longest and most shapely from being hoisted on high red heels. Every pair of eyes was trained on her. Some in the club gawked with eyes that hid beneath mascara-painted lashes, flitting envy. Others leered with pupils dilating lust from ogling the two soft protrusions in her tight white turtleneck. Then with pink champagne in hand, the goddess turned and surveyed her audience, most of whom by now had looked away. One remained, mesmerized, with eyes riveted on her. He quivered when she caught his gaze and strolled over to where he sat. As she approached, he marveled at her face - the chiseled cheekbones strong and high, the dark eyes, luminescent and immense, and curiously, an upturned nose so delicate it seemed almost too perfect, like one acquired from a sculptor’s hands. He gulped when she asked him for a dance, and as he asked this intriguing lady’s name, he wondered at the timbre of her voice, so provocative and low as she tossed dark brown locks and said seductively, “My name is Lola. L-O-L-A , Lola.” 11/20/13 Inspired by an old song from the 70's and the Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Andrea, love it..... Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:19:00 AM

    I loved this one when IO read it earlier. Fine writing! Congratulations... Jack

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:41:00 AM

    An excellent poem to the max my dear friend Andrea! So love it and thoroughly enjoyed! Thank u so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! Biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:38:00 PM

    enjoyed reading this again Andrea congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:35:00 PM

    Ahhh.this was awesome to read again...congratulations Andrea

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 6:12:00 PM

    andrea, this is certainly the best poem that you've entered in a contest of mine - flawlessly written, it really painted a vivid picture for me, I enjoyed it a lot - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 6:00:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Andrea

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:47:00 PM

    UT OH! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:55:00 PM

    This bit of erotica gets the blood running. Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Oh well done with the typ-ography L O L of lola here Andrea; really reminicent of the old song I have not ventured near Soho for many years it has such a...well empty sort of allure i would suppose is the best way to describe it, holds the promise of disappointment at first impression, so you are left wondering why you should feel dissapointed anyway..?

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:46:00 PM

    "Whatever Lola wants, Lola gets." Ah yes, I remember so well. Smashing write, dear Andrea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 6:04:00 AM

    Reads like a winner for the contest to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:07:00 PM

    ...Kinks were great..Also did a song I doubt anyone remembers..Bald Headed Lena....Interesting write

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 8:52:00 AM

    This is a winner! I remember that song. Catchy tune.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:57:00 PM

    I remember the song, but I suspect there's something else happening here. What it is ain't exactly clear. Great imagery, and fun to read. Good luck... Jack

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:55:00 PM

    very tasteful Andrea a lovely pen gl in contest Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:24:00 PM

    Hi Andrea, wow... Now this is a riot... Love the sensual feeling... good luck in the contest..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:50:00 PM

    That was a great song, I always liked it, and yours was an incredible poem that took me back to the sixties when I used to love going to Soho as a randy teenager. Thanks for the read, wonderful stuff....peter

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 1:06:00 PM

    Ha..oh my Andrea..you are just fantastic!!!the greatest idea ever...and you did it perfectly! Wow...who doesn't know and remember Lola from highschool?..WINNER....

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:44:00 AM

    You took it BACK! I love it. Great job. Now I want to hear Tom Jones and Barry Gibb all day...God help me...

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:12:00 AM

    Andrea you just gave me an idea, So back to the seventies I go, xxx

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Andrea I thick you nailed this contest hands down, this shows a high level of creativity and writing skill, love love love it, xxx

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 3:24:00 AM

    ANDREA!!! I'm so silly!!! Thanks for sending me the link...Amazing song! I loved the Kinks! HA HA! Funny name, though. I even looked up the lyrics cause some of the words confused me.....Ummmmm...walked like a woman and talked like a man...nearly broke his spine...I'm like....Is Lola a man dressed in drag? Ha ha! You did so well with this, Andrea, but then again..you are amazing! I'm sure your daughter knows that but for whatever reason is reticent about expressing it. HUGS!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 1:12:00 AM

    Awesome, indeed:)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:53:00 PM

    OHHHH my gosh! lol You know, I suspected it... hmmm I think it was when he was marveling at her face, I don't know why but it occurred to me... hmmm and then I read the ending and had to laugh :) AWESOME!!!!! :) I love Thomas' comment below haha

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:26:00 PM

    hahahaha..... I love this song and your story certainly caught my attention until the end! I wonder if she ordered a cola c.o.l.a. cola. =P

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:48:00 PM

    Wow, the is wonderful. You did capture the song well. This should be a winner.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Hey Petal, do you rem me telling about going to a party dressed as a hooker, I called myself Lola, Tell you what, I'll go to this club as Lola if you go as the commitment phobic hahaha. Atmospheric write good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:21:00 PM

    OOoo la la ~~!! Lola's hot !

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 7:09:00 PM

    you told this sensual story well, Andrea...hugs

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