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Bad Gems

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Bad Gems

Once there was a man called Joseph “the Gem”,
very clear of “sinners“, “traitors”, the worst of them.
Ditch and seek pardon – sinner.
Ditch and never seek pardon – traitor.
Bloody if sinners are Gems then traitors could be “bad Gems”!

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 10:27:00 PM
    this has an interesting final line. That's what makes a limerick good.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Hello Jenish, wow.. Love the limerick... Joseph, the loving heart... All games can be forgiven.... Love this... LINDA