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Quote Left"A man goes to a psychiatrist. The doctor says, 'You're crazy' The man says, 'I want a second opinion!' 'Okay, you're ugly too!'"Quote Right

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  1. Date: 12/6/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Sad and beautiful poem , F.J. I especially liked the last stanza. That you will stand and he is left with a void. Payback.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/6/2013 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol you got it Ralph! Thank you.
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:43:00 AM

    very interesting. I enjoyed it.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/6/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Funom. I'm glad you did :)
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:27:00 PM

    We can guess but never know what awaits when he hold forth our heart only to see it taken and stepped on. But the heart's a powerful muscle and when healed will strike back. I enjoyed your rhyme.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/19/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is is Mark :) thanks for letting me know you liked it!
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:55:00 PM

    This poem really lets it all out very effectively...especially liked the last part of the last line.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/19/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good morning Dave; thank you for reading it, I'm glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:35:00 PM

    Although we have know each other for but a glimpse, I feel the want to be your protector. I know that you're strong and that you are all set with friends, and a wonderful husband, a part of me just wants to hold your hand. Many of your sad words are from your past I hope that is the case here.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/18/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mostly the past yes; thank you Greg. I actually keep my group of friends very small, as the word in itself is something I do not take lightly :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Who would be cruel enough to damage and make your tender loving heart bleed, my dear? I hope no-one! However, if there could ever be someone to commit such a heinous crime, he wouldn't deserve for him you pain to feel, tears to shed or a drop of your precious blood to bleed! Marvelous poem, dynamic, provoking and inspiring!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/18/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm afraid I was not excluded from that part of life :) But I am stronger for it....my heart more guarded, but stronger. Thank you Demetrios.