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Shocks Of Electrifying Emotion

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Shocks Of Electrifying Emotion

There is a magnetic field
That is keeping my love sealed
A force so strong it is intense
Just like and electric fence
That shocks me each time we touch
But I just can't get enough
Of this static overflow
I am just about to blow
And release a shock so large
The amount of my discharge
Will send waves of love right through
The core, soul and heart of you
You will know my love is real
With the heat your body feels
The tazeing I will supply
Is coming out of my eyes
Beams of romance I will shoot
At you looking very cute
All this energy is warm
Like and electrical storm
Flashing bolts of big bright light
Making a romantic night

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  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:58:00 AM
    You go girl. You are all charged up like the every ready bunny. I can feel the tingle from here.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 6:35:00 AM
    I absolutely felt the electricity in this piece; I felt it as I read it and totally loved it. This is going into my "faves" for sure, Sweet Pea! I think this is one of the best things you've written <3

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:31:00 PM
    This poem is very creative and unique, Robin! Love can definitely feel electrifying at times! I really like this poem, your descriptions are great here. Really good work!...Thank you very much for the wonderful comments on my poem! :)