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rain,you come often for, I would live sane

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rain,you come often for, I would live sane

For walking, by early morning sharp 6,
Parking my cycle by children’s park,
Started I, round the park.
Breeze severe, drizzle slow.
Rushing to shelter I see rain, 
no welcome face in park.
happy inside I showed aversion 
my surprise! Flowers smile, butterflies dance,
bloody some flies too joined the dance.
passion in me got triggered .
I wanted to dance with flies
try catching butterflies and flies .
I fear for, all in the shelter may laugh,
my dignity my respect I bother much.
envying the butterflies and flowers
Lucky fellows gifted to dance and smooch!
I saw a boy near me in my spirit.
tried sweet talk to make him dance in rain.
too smart this fellow, he wanted me to dance first.
I cursed the younger generation for not loving nature
I told him, “In our days we would dance the whole day”!
fellow said, “you country fellow, I have a date today”.
I cursed him “go hell. Dance with evil spirits”.
I became very nostalgic of my childhood days!
By school days ,I try all eccentric things .
Believe me,I even lay flat on the ground 
and look at rain in all angles.
Even research on reflection of light on rain drops.
Today I could never imagine for that in all rain 
probably I have to take a picnic for that.
But for sure, the sense of rain
always makes me nostalgic, 
a great cure for many of my untold pains.
rain,you come often for, I would live sane……


15-11-2013. by Jenish Soosai anthony for 
"Fragrance of rain" contest by nette onclaud.

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Thank-you for your contest sponsored , I came her to Thank-you ..and found this amazing piece of poetry ! I have been blessed many times today. Shanity Rain.

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    Date: 11/26/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 11/19/2013 12:54:00 PM
    this so beautifully descriptive...you paint a most vivid, child-like picture of rain, jenish... since i was caught up in the beauty of this wonderful write, i cited you in my blog... a winner in my heart!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 4:35:00 AM
    profound write of many layers Jenish good pen. TY for visiting my work . These days our royals have no real power they can only influence Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 9:37:00 PM
    as a child I loved the rain...running through it, dancing in it can all be fun but now I don't like being caught in it...enjoyed your poem...good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 5:35:00 PM
    a very interesting take on this topic, Jenish. It's good to know that you relish the rain so much!!