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  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:35:00 PM
    Talk about coining a phrase! EXCELLENT!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 11:50:00 AM
    the gentleman drew me out from my cave ;) I am doing good thanks, really hope you are too. I got to tell you I love the message here.. ;)

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 8:00:00 AM
    hope springs eternal.. well penned Scribe....thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 5:06:00 AM
    The process of moving from darkness to light is so elegantly put in these few, yet well selected words...Wonderful job Scribe!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
    marlon!.. love the climb uphill where hope redeems... whoot..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 11:08:00 PM
    This was mighty nice! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Powerful punch in few well chosen words. X

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 12:16:00 AM
    I LOVE it! I like how you've used the word slithering - it makes for a more smooth progression, it is certainly more appealing than crawling. Well written Scribe!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Stop! ..................LoL... soup mail...PD

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 12:00:00 PM
    ha, Scribe...:) I am not going no where pass these doors... If The Light wants me, it's got to remove all them logs and rocks found down my passage of no hope. I'm just kidding, i'm negative when it comes to crossing on over.... :-) that is my troubled or should i say BAD way....:-)...always ..Linda

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 10:54:00 AM
    ...... let the light lead you forward.... All the best to you Marlon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)