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Falling Into You

Longing for your touch on this empty night
I’m falling into you as my dreams take flight
The only way that I can have you near 
Is to be with you until dreams disappear
I’ll take your hand when you ask me to dance 
We’ll spend the night in this fantasy romance 
With thoughts of you lying by my side 
My slumbered thoughts will be satisfied 
When daylight streams across my bed
I’ll still be loving you, lost inside my head 

Please don’t wake me from this bliss
To leave your arms for sunlight’s kiss
I don’t want to end this night’s romance
Don’t want to face the day; I’d rather dance 
The sheets feel cool against my skin
Your scent is on my mind, I’m still drinking you in  
My eyes half-closed, I want to take my time
To linger with your body close to mine 
But as I reach out to feel you near me
I’m awakened to the cold reality

Alone in this world, I go about my day 
Distracting thoughts of you come back to play
Remembering when you whispered my name 
My mind is on that moment, my heart is aflame
No matter what this day might bring
That memory alone will make me sing 
The daydreams make the waiting worthwhile
I think of you, and have to hide my smile 
All day long I’m looking forward to the night
When dreams of loving you will again take flight 

© Rebecca  2013





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  1. Date: 4/7/2014 10:12:00 AM

    Another beautiful love poem Rebecca!

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Outstanding!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/27/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Chuck :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 2:29:00 PM

    This is a very touching poem..I love it dearly. :)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/27/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Pace, thank you!! :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Really moving Becca. I totally love this.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/27/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Mustapha :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:14:00 AM

    beauty all around what a wonderful poem to start my day thank you

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/17/2013 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your sweet comment! :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:07:00 PM

    It is lovely to reread this poem once again.I remember It..How could one forget such a beautiful and deep emotive piece?!!!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/14/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw, thank you Charmaine! :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:53:00 PM

    Dreamy dreamy write Becca, dreams like these can be very fulfiling till the real thing comes along. Beautiful couplet telling it how it is. Take care, Richard

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/14/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Richard! The real thing is always better :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:10:00 PM

    these are very lovely and romantic couplets. Becca. Good love poem! Yes, I do write free verse now and then but it usually has a more prose feeling to it, which is why I called one of my chapbooks Prosies!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/14/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea!
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 1:26:00 PM

    Your nights are beautiful, in numinous dreams. The sun rises and carries away with it, this seductive thrill. Sometimes I feel this bitter and sudden absence when I open my eyes. ... J'attends avec impatience, l'agréable douceur d'une nouvelle étreinte nocturne. Souvent, j'ai aussi ce rêve. ... B'n'K Lady, your Fan.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/14/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Joël ... I love it when you comment on my poems! You know your opinion means a lot to me. xoxox
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:45:00 AM

    this is beautiful and poignant at the same time...i have been there, sometimes those dreams make the day much brighter...some memories just linger on longer than others... Great write Becca :) hugs

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your sweet comment, Sandra... I like the way you put it ! :) hugs <3
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Exquisite & deeply touching. "Your scent is on my mind. I'm still drinking you in"...spot on.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Drake! :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:47:00 AM

    So very lovely yet sad Becca...you have written a beautiful verse here...luv,Deb

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw, thank you Deb! It's so great to see you, thank you for your kind comment! :) hugs <3
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:04:00 AM

    Hi Becca, am I correct in saying that I recognize this beauty from earlier in the year? I am adding to my favorites and have a feeling it use to occupy that spot.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Pleasure Becca, it is a really good poem.
    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rick, I'm honored that you remember this! :) Yes, it was inspired by Craig's contest, Dreaming Into the Day. I've made some small changes... I'm also honored that you want to add it to your favorites, thank you!!
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:45:00 AM

    What a passionate tender love poem as only you can write them! This was a poetic gem, my dearest Rebecca! Love and sweet hugs, my dear! The Jackster xox

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Jackster, I appreciate that ! :) hugs xoxo
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 5:07:00 AM

    Beautifully tender and romantic! Who could resist to be in your dreams? Excellent dear Becca!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Demetrios, you are very kind, thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment! :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 3:45:00 AM

    - I'll make a quiet comment so you do not wake up out of your beautiful dream .... Sleep and dream many beautiful dreams Becca. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for not waking me too soon, sweet lady ... Still, I was glad to see your comment when I woke :) Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Hugs <3
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:23:00 AM

    This is such a positive look at loneliness, the hope of having another dream filled night of love sweet love! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! you have impressed me yet again with this awesome piece! What a grandiose verse, Great Work!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/13/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Russell, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it :)