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Atlantis

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Atlantis

~ATLANTIS~   Featuring:) Kelly Deschler

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Can't be re-written by the Gods
The land and sands of time'
Destroyed by the fire of Poseidon's curse 
Atlantis swallowed by: Earth
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In one day and one night
Peaceful existence met its end
Built on a volcano, now surrounded by ancient rippled tears
Lava stripped apart the rich and glorious empire
Enriched by Engineers and Architects whom loved power more than the Gods 
Forgotten souls, sheltered by a watery grave
History withheld from shallow sunken memories,
Western sky's hide the truth, a vision from the Pillars of Hercules
"An island situated in front of The Strait of Gibraltar"
Ghostly ruins wait to rise above the Mediterranean and Atlantic Waves
A magical island held down by the hands of death, 
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Atlantis lost city walls ---a secret hidden by mermaids
Partially buried, beneath the ocean floor it lies
The largest sunken treasure never to be found
Magnificent pillars of an imperial palace still stand
Somewhere hidden under ancient sand
Some are leaning against turrets, that toppled after the impact
Nothing human will ever inhabit these walls
No feet will ever touch these staircases, again
Only an eerie silence now resides here, with the blue-green waters   
Seaweed grows along it's outer walls, like ivy on a trellis.
Obscuring it even further from the human eye.
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Other ocean tides will never compare
Tantalizing blend of fantasy and mystery
Stone walls covered with precious gems
 -Listen to PLATO'S voice-
"Look close, Look close, into the sea!"
Through the light and Pillars of Hercules
Some where out there buried in the vast 
ATLANTIS THE PARADISE


~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 8/9/2014 1:15:00 AM
    I love the story of the lost continents-Atlantis being the greatest. Bravo!

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Bloody good poem makes me feel like I want to roam as well swim in the deepest part of the vast ocean to find the treasure of their great extortion, I don't know if this makes sense but this is creativity at its best. I love the story of atlantis :)

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 1:36:00 PM
    Tis The Exceptionally Cool Thing About Magnificent Poetry As Verse In General; Brushed By Their Highly Gifted Writers...Within Merely But A Few Lines As Words Well Crafted, They Can Transport Us The Reader Unto A Magical Moment With But A Stroke, From Their Enchanting Brush....Sailing, Takes Me Away To Where I'm Going ? Your Poetry Is Simply Astounding And This, Belongs Atop Her Pedestal Amid A Child's Favourites....Love, Jeremy

  1. Date: 3/27/2014 8:14:00 PM
    God your message i'm here for a while off and on working on rewrites lol cheri

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 8:20:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery! Well worded; it takes me there.

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 9:46:00 AM
    I am reading this again. Beautiful! 7 G.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 2:53:00 PM
    Wow! That's on fire. A very gripping poem. I'm speechless.

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 9:09:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest sis! Good morning there! Stoppin by again for a while before loggin off.I'll come back tom. I was quite enthusiastic a while ago to write another poem. I thought it can be used for your contest but when I was about to enter it, to my surprised, there's a theme lol;))))). I've overlooked on it. Ok, I'll be back soon. Let me see if I can;))). Sending my love, hugs & smiles my loving & forever sis & BFF. lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest sis & bff! I'm stopping by once again to read this stunning write of yours w/c exudes your wonderful talent & superb creativity. Loving it so much as always. Thank you so much also for stopping by on my latest poem. You're also a diamond in my eyes & was so grateful being w/ u during the countdown. TYSM also for the support in my latest contest & my hearty congrats again. For everything, can't thank u enough. By the way, I've new contest my dearest sis;))) Lovelyhugs! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 4:26:00 AM
    descriptive and beautiful...

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Amazing great poem!

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Atlantis lives in all of us. I am sure Edgar Cayce would revel within this write P.D. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:24:00 PM
    A very good write about the Lost City of Atlantis. Gorgeous imagery, well done!!

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Hello Linda, This is another well written poem. Wouldn't it be awesome to be the one to find Atlantis...Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 1:23:00 PM
    I HEARD ATLANTIS is a nice city if you can find it i remember reading up on the native americans and the history ect this is really insightful as like a lot of your writes draws the reader in well written and said xxx davidscott

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
    Love it, great collaboration ;} as I start reading it my 6yr old grand-daughter says " the mermaids are hiding it" before I even got to the mermaid line ;} Happy Thanksgiving Linda ;} Thanks 4 reading my Contradictions !

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Excellent to the highest level (^___^) Wow!! magnificent piece from a great poet. thank for sharing. Have a blessed day always :) hugggggs

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Linda, good one from you. I love it.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Beautiful. Take me away to the walls of Atlantis, where I can more than imagine the beauty and distraught. So wonderful. Also, very very very gracious for the win! <3 I commented back :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 5:56:00 AM
    Beautifully written, this piece breathes its mysterious content throughout. I love reading on Atlantis... Carolyn Devonshire has written a wonderful novel on such content which I found a most enjoyable and relaxing read - you might want check it out!

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