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The Temple of Existence

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The Temple of Existence

The noble knight came to this treasured hall
to heed the universal call.
To a force he was enthralled
to bring about a righteous fall.

The temple was lit with images of light,
of mechanisms hid out of sight,
that worked the universal core
and kept the keys to secret doors.

The knight could see what others could not,
embracing these that many had sought.
The dark one had been here before
to manipulate the magic doors.

The knight he stood and made his signs
to manipulate the magic lines.
Here he dissolved the dark ones deeds,
by configuring the magic keys.

Existence moved with a start
to the tempo of the knight's heart,
realigned by these invisible keys
to this force's mystic need.

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:39:00 PM
    enjoyed this one great read Joe

    Bronson Avatar Brian Bronson
    Date: 1/9/2014 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Joe!
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:51:00 AM
    awesome read, I love the knight of old. a worthy subject to pen on.

    Bronson Avatar Brian Bronson
    Date: 1/9/2014 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated, Poetess Darkly! :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Enjoyed the mystery of this. Great imagery, rhyme and flow. Especially liked the 2nd stanza. Captivating~

    Bronson Avatar Brian Bronson
    Date: 1/9/2014 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Karen!