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as the wind fades

Today, although the air is still, I find yesterday's essence still tarries along in the consciousness of my own mind yet gossamery is what once blew strong faded are memories of breathless sighs once carried on breezes of love's firm hold where summer never wiped dry her own eyes or saw her color fall in leaves of old reflections dance in the smoke of night's air shadowing the once exposed in her veil yet as the fog lifts, I still see us there naked in the hold of a breeze, less stale we linger in the thoughts of yesterday alive, only by memory today.

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 1:33:00 PM

    very beautifully crafted piece

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/14/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you liam :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:47:00 AM

    beautifully penned.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 5:57:00 AM

    Beautiful, a very beautiful poem with excellent imagery, loved it!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Bindu :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:21:00 AM

    Excellent work on the topic of aging, memories, and longings..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Sara :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:10:00 PM

    I love sonnets... this one is so beautiful. Memories are sometimes all we have. Well done Sandra!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Becca...so true....hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:06:00 PM

    Excellent. Very descriptive poem write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ravi :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Sandra, a wonderful sonnet. beautiful and amazing imagery.... xox~ LINDA

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Linda :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:50:00 PM

    This has a melancholy feel to it, thank God for memories, Sandra, they keep the candle's glow alive well done, xxx

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:22:00 PM

    Very descriptive write Sandra,you captured the wind and breeze beautifully, blessings Carl

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carl :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:07:00 PM

    your sonnet, without the iambic pentameter, is nonetheless genius!! It's a modern sonnet at its best, Sandy. You can write such a poem beautifully.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea...been wanting to write something... it was windy and cold today, the leaves are falling fast, trees are becoming bare...guess it was my inspiration! hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:02:00 PM

    Oh i am reading some wonderful sonnets today,, and this is right there at the top...beautiful poetry

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much for your kind reply Harry...it made me smile this evening :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:18:00 PM

    - Sandra, feel sadness .... but reading the beautiful words. - Well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne-Lise....hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Hi Sandra, Some good sentimental stuff here. Ken

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken for your visit and kind words :)