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Forever Blue

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Forever Blue

I am forever blue,
Just like the sky,
All the rain that falls on you,
Is how I feel when I cry.

I am deep blue like the sea,
Barely breathing beneath the waves,
How lonely can one be?,
There's nothing left here to save.

This feeling is not once in a blue moon,
It lasts all day and night,
It's as deep as a blue lagoon,
With no end in sight.

The frosty air is so cold,
On this blue December night,
Here is what my future holds,
And I know it isn't right.

My whole life has been so blue,
With so many turns like a river,
The water is so cold now, too,
It makes me really shiver.

My future is so blue,
And this is my only end,
I want to tell you, I love you,
Because you're my only friend.

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  1. Date: 1/20/2014 12:03:00 AM
    Beautiful flow and rhyme. Loved it! Congrats on your first place win

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/20/2014 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for stopping by with such kind words, Christopher! It means a lot coming from you.
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:47:00 PM
    Beautiful and very personal quatrain! I am your friend, too! Smiles, and congrats on your beautiful poem and win! 7 G.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/20/2014 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for stopping by with such kind words, Giorgio! And, thank you for being a friend, I appreciate it! :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 7:31:00 PM
    Sweet ending, Kelly. Congrats!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/20/2014 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for the kind words, Juliet! I appreciate you stopping by.
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 6:28:00 PM
    I loved reading this one, all those images and expressions using blue. VERY nice. And congrats for the win.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/20/2014 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for the kind words, Andrea! I appreciate you stopping by.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 6:54:00 PM
    Very beautiful yet a sad write in many ways, quite a pointante. cheri thank you for your wonderful words on my winter wonderland poem. it means alot to me

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Kelly Such a sad and emotional write. You tugged at my heartstrings and made me tear up. Did you suggest this one to get back at me for making you cry with mine. LOL Nice job Thanks for the sweet and kind comment on my Waiting In Heaven poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 5:28:00 AM
    First thing I thought of was Chris Isaak's song "Forever Blue" (a song I love). Beautiful piece with beautiful emotion expressed in ways that only you can achieve :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:14:00 PM
    deep beautifully crafted piece kelly

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:28:00 AM
    very well expressed, Kelly... Take care, hugs!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 2:34:00 AM
    Blue,love and friend ...all the words are so far from each other and sometimes they seems to be very close to each other.You give a mixture of all...well done!!