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My Surrender

Bindu Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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My Surrender

A time to cry, put aside
Locked up in my eternity’s void
I will cry another day
When I can handle this madness better

Under insane words I hide
Knives in my soul, love in my rhythm
My sanity mocks my existence
I fall apart as my divinity claims all

I smell the lotuses
And witness beauty seduce everything…
Everything melts, every cell lights up
The power of beauty, the seducer, the spiritual…

Turn around Time, its your hour to go
No more linear hours to pile up morality
Your rules will fall apart, stumble and disappear
Disintegrate to shake these centuries off

Rituals – Dance when you get there
Its your call, your last move at camouflage…
Everything dissolves as the spiral speeds up
Lives and hopes, wishes and visions…

Ah! My breath, wont you rush too?
Don’t rasp their rhythm, play traitor to life
Am I the witness, or, the victim?
On the spiral’s edge, surrendering… moving on…

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 8:46:00 AM

    For some reason I keep coming back to this one. There is much wisdom here.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 3/28/2014 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Richard.. feels great that you come back to read my earlier poems. have a super cool weekend! for me, this weekend is going to be busier than what the rest of the week was!!
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 5:11:00 PM

    Hauntingly beautiful, I've had experience on the same edge it does add a little kinda of a different flavor to ones poetry does it not my friend, a great write here my fellow souper. cheri Also thank you for your comments and visit to my site. lol

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Good morning Bindu.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Beautiful. In surrendering, you have conquered and soared free.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 10:23:00 AM

    hello, bindu... hope to read something new from you..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 6:42:00 AM

    A powerful write Bindu covering in it and projecting some of the most talked about questions of today. You have brilliantly revealed those layers, which often blinds us to see beyond our faith and beliefs. A gem of a write dear friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:02:00 AM

    - Crying may make relief .... but no joy. - There is always light at the end of a tunnel. - A beautiful and touching poem Bindu. - I wish you all the best. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:40:00 AM

    very powerful emotional write from you...sometimes we need to surrender to be free to move on...this is an incredible write from you :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:25:00 AM

    Good morning, I enjoyed reading this gem again.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:57:00 PM

    Deeply moving words, Bindu. Sometimes life moves so fast that we have no choice but to surrender to it. Unfortunately, our hopes and dreams end up forgotten in time. An amazing piece of poetry!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:28:00 PM

    A very deep emotional write Bindu, it bears your heart's signature, much I enjoyed passing through, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Stunning, powerful and BEAUTIFULLY written my friend...You said the form was 'I do not know?' Well I know...the form is called 'Damn good poetry!' - Tim

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Wonderful, Bindu. Keep on with your poetic flow.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 3:19:00 PM

    You are truly a writer of wonderful words Bindu, I most certainly wish I had your word power. This is a wonderful poem, jy friend....Peter

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 2:50:00 PM

    truly penned really beautifully deeply crafted in moving forward

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 2:47:00 PM

    You take the reader on an intriguing journey with this splendid write Bindu....thanks for stopping by...

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:43:00 AM

    This had my attention all the way through. Moving on...moving forward...incredible.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Our greatest freedom can be realized through surrender. Surrendering ourself to God and trusting in His Love will not be futile. I very much enjoyed your poem Bindu.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:07:00 AM

    Of course we could never leave Bindu on any edge, let alone a spiraling one :) Her words move us too much. Loved it Lady; but I just read another peaceful poem with your name in it. Go see Thomas Simunsen poetry and look for the Poetry Soup Cafe poem ;)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:45:00 AM

    ooooh, bindu...explosive ramblings on life so fiercely written in a language that highlights the layers od mind/ body/ soul..your 3rd stanza brings it on!.. simply awesome!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:01:00 AM

    glad to see you again Bindu, I hope you're feeling better. I love the questions through this. I especially like the last stanza. *Ah! My breath, wont you rush too? Don’t rasp their rhythm, play traitor to life Am I the witness, or, the victim? On the spiral’s edge, surrendering… moving on…*

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:03:00 AM

    Hi Bindu, A delightful write from you.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:53:00 AM

    Soul searching quest among the shadows of doubt and the blinding light of truth! Surrender to life is not a defeat but a victory for understanding! Wonderful, dear Bindu!