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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:34:00 PM

    I'm glad to see you're posting your poems again, frank! this one has undergone substantial revision - I liked the raw emotion of the first version, but I like the opening stanza in this version...food for thought here, and I just think it's sad that the human race is conditioned to go through life feeling guilt about, well, being human...I know I said something along those lines before...

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:17:00 PM

    Hello Frank..I just read this wonderful write of yours and am still pondering its depth...it's amazing My personal thoughts.....the rules don't change when it comes to God..all He wants is our love..He knows we are imperfect...if we weren't, we wouldn't need Him..such a lovely lovely heartfelt poem...

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:47:00 PM

    I remember this beauty.No hell s damnation for someone with a heart like yours Frank.We all have our lusty thoughts.. yet thoughts are just thoughts..They come and go like an evanescent dream .Beautifully penned.I love to debate with my inner soul and God as well Frank.He s so muxh unlike us human.His love and forgivness so grand.