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HOW LUSH--SF

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HOW LUSH--SF



the soft expanse of a forest
is warmed by breath of sunlight,
twirls of fresh aureoles ripen
into wildly combed trees,
much like gypsy- red daytime
cradling a sense of hometown innocence
if only to remember one's beginnings..

softly, i lay among a hammock of buds
etched on aisles of moist stones and rocks
and in the wisp of morning's sigh,
i turn into a garment of foliage
not knowing how the wind
can scatter my breath into grains;
to amble in a dance ...till i fall

headlong into the lush of content.



Succintly Free ( SF) Contest, Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:59:00 PM

    Nette, Awesome free verse... xox~ Linda,

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:39:00 PM

    great write and win Nette....congrats

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:51:00 AM

    Oh you definitely deserve to be on top with this gem! Beautiful imaginative and breathtaking. Congrats

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:49:00 AM

    I read this before and commented on it, and it went straight to the top, just as I thought it would! congrats on your top spot win! :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 8:14:00 PM

    when i read this i knew i would find it in the winner's list...gorgeous poem, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:49:00 PM

    You never cease to amaze, congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Nette, everything charlotte said below here is right. I did not understand why you said lush of content. But everything else was so stunningly beautiful, I had to give it first place. Just gorgeous.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:37:00 PM

    I echo all that has been said below - ethereal and stunning, love that scattering of breath into grains! good luck in the contest (but I don't think you'll need it, should be right up andrea's boulevard!) :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Ethereal, beautifully morphed into nature.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:45:00 AM

    You sure know how to paint a very vivid picture. This is a stunning verse. I enjoyed every bit. It was sweet and succulent throughout. Love the last line--says it all. Oh how I miss the lush in this city I live in! Its nice to read about what I really love... Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Wow!! Enchanting work... turn into a garment of foliage not knowing how the wind can scatter your breath into grains... this is ethereal mind-blowing stuff!!! 7777s

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:32:00 AM

    Enrapture of screaming beauty!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:02:00 PM

    A wonderful poem. you painted a beautiful picture here. Thanks.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 7:38:00 PM

    Who could not be content in this wonderful creation, beautiful write Nette. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:04:00 PM

    breathtakingly beautiful piece...sounds like a paradise that you have penned here....enjoyed this one today :) ...hope you made out well with the typhoon...hugs!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:30:00 PM

    You can easily be golden wheat, a flower in bloom, or just joyful Nette, ,have a sweet dream, either way, beauty is beauty in any language or form, love your verse xxx

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:58:00 PM

    This is most certainly a beautiful poem Nette, enjoyed from beginning to end...Peter

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Hi Nette, A most lovely write from you... Ken

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:19:00 PM

    awesome write, Nette - hope you are safe with the storms. Thanks very much, great contest

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:06:00 PM

    nette, breathtaking as always. Prayers to your continued safety through the aftermath of the storms.

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Beautiful scene of forest adorned with sweet colors of sweet imagination. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:26:00 AM

    DEEP SIGHS!!! So many man-goosebumps! Yes! Cherish the simple breaths, the simple pleasures...

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:45:00 AM

    - Like beautiful music to my ears :) - Have a nice Sunday, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:09:00 AM

    Your poem sounds like describing the garden of eden ...so wonderful..I would love to be here feel this....

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 2:40:00 AM

    So beautiful. "Hi, actually I just wanted to know if my poem " Lost" that I had entered in your contest" Senses for sestest" is in iambic pentameter or not?. I am really keen on learning poetic forms, and trying to learn myself through various websites. But please kindly guide me on this aspect. Thanks:)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:19:00 PM

    A garment of foliage-- this is the centerpiece signed with contentment at the end line.True mark of a deep artist.I'm glad I took the risk of entering your contest, thank you kindly, Nette!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:32:00 PM

    It surely is lush, your write is truly a lush environment of pure delight my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have portrayed a daytime full of content and amazement! What a spectacular piece, what a magnificent poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:38:00 PM

    very beautiful and descriptive of such a lush environment...good one Nette! love, Deb