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This Polished Pewter Day

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This Polished Pewter Day

November's bright dawn mirrors a slate colored lake beneath silver clouds manifesting hope's glimmer on this polished pewter day Written 11/8/13 for Francine Roberts' Tanka Me Fall or WinterContest

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  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:40:00 PM

    Delightful . This is a new form of poetry for me but a joy to read .

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:56:00 PM

    Congratulations Andrea...breathtaking

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  1. Date: 11/16/2013 11:30:00 AM

    love your tanka, a deserve winner...

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Wow! What an image. Congrats, Andrea!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 8:23:00 AM

    congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 4:47:00 AM

    - Congrats on your win, Andrea. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:42:00 PM

    this was well deserving of a first place finish. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:36:00 AM

    congrats on yout win Andrea....

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 10:28:00 AM

    Oh.....l love the reference to pewter......just beautifully done, honor to share with you!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 5:23:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:29:00 PM

    Fantastic write! Grats on your win. CTB

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:27:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest, awesome entry !

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:26:00 PM

    You have done marvels with the scene you describe here Andrea, a win in my estimation 4 Sure..' Joe..)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Had to look up pewter - Wow! Good image. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Andrea a great poem.Seems like cautioning to behave.A great poem to read on good you Andrea. (: )Jenish.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Beautiful picture, Andrea! Top notch poetry as always...I wanted to stop by and thank you for the win in your last contest. I am always honored to place in one of your contests. Sorry I haven't been here much lately. Family is keeping me away. Hopefully, I will catch up. I'm missing so many great poems and contests, too! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:02:00 PM

    Pewter, Tanka, I'm beginning to get this, pewter tankard, am I right Petal lol, just pour me a lake to swill this delicious poem down with. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 1:53:00 AM

    I love this, very vivid. =)

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 11/11/2013 1:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry haven't been around much. I have been busy with Uni work as I approach the last week of Uni for this year. I also have part time work of an evening, so time has been short. Will be about more when Uni is over for the year =)
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:27:00 PM

    awesome tanka - congrats on your wins (I'm sure this will be a winner too)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Pewter, my favorite metal. Perfect word to use for your entry Andrea. Loved it!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:48:00 PM

    Your poem is excellent and perfect in every way my dear friend! A winner for me as always. By the way, big hearty congrats to all your wins! So sorry I was running out of time always. I'll do my best to read many winning pieces individually & do congrats them when I've finished my work they entrusted since I came back & after judging my contest hopefully this wk;)))). Thanks God, my family was safe. Thanks a lot for your care & concern & your lovely comments/messages. TYSM! love & big hugsLeo

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 11/9/2013 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll come back to read more of your amazing writes soon.
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:08:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..It is expressive of some of the mornings here lately..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2013 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I may have deleted your last soup mail before I read it if you could answer me again if I did..Sara
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Nice write Andrea. a nice calm picture you have created here, I love lakes. Good luck in the contest...peter

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 2:51:00 PM

    A great write, Andrea - best wishes in the contest! Many thanks for your visits to my poems :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 1:14:00 PM

    polished pewter day... I love it! Great job!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:23:00 AM

    This is a perfect write depicting a typical November day, at least most Novembers anyway! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a masterfully written piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

    I can so see this one unfolding...a perfectly painted November scene :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:46:00 AM

    You rock Andrea! This is really good.

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Beautiful! This one is definitely a winner.