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Fall

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Fall

The sun at rest now
 A dance of grass and roses
breezes and poppy's lush now
The rivers are calm and clear
The Sun sleeps from its season



Nov. 8, 2013

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:05:00 PM
    line 3 should have no more than 5 syllables

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Beautiful images for any November day, Julie