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Be the keeper of your pain

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Be the keeper of your pain

  This is Poetry , for the reader  INTERPRETs  , 


  Why won't you leave ?
     Isn't you whom betrayed me with your actions ?
  Do I really care to tally whom started which action or reaction first ?

  No, It longer matters you see 
     Thee thrill is gone in fact died in me
  Do I want to live with anger and madness anymore ?

  Please honor my wishes , and just walk out the door
     This time take all you have in which you entered my life with.
  I only want you to find peace and love in your soul of tortured memories.

  For these memories lie within you long before I met thee
     In innocence wanting to cure and love the soul within 
  realizing I can not save you nor be your keeper of all pain.

  I Love you , Yet Love is not going to save you through this 
    I let you go now let me go and let us be free .
  I no longer wish to live with the lies anymore , let me be free.  

  Only happiness will return with change , you will see.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:07:00 PM
    So many emotions lingering deep here.To lt go of someone and stop believing the lie of a once promised land.When love is shattered like a broken vase it can be mended but not renewed..Changes do bring happiness..many times. I am glad to read such beauty.. and tnks for your kindred comments : )

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 3:37:00 PM
    I think many of us have been in a situation like this before. Letting go and moving on from a painful relationship is the only way to be truly free. A very deep and emotional poem. Really great work, Shanity!

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    Date: 11/27/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my friend and awesome poetess !
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Shanity Your work is amazing.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/27/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Chuck M. :) when I have a chance , I will read your poems . Thank-you for reading mine . S.R.
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:58:00 PM
    Great poem, Shanity. Nice method of writing too, Shakespearean mood. Deeply express, and enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/26/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I just noticed this comment , it was a darker poem indeed , I use all emotions in writing . I will check out your poems !!
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 3:49:00 PM
    heartfelt beautiful piece

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/13/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Liam :) I love your visits as well. Seems like a long ,long, time !