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MAY DECEMBER ROMANCE

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Below is the poem entitled MAY DECEMBER ROMANCE which was written by poet Arden Gopela. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MAY DECEMBER ROMANCE

                     Cold winter, sprouting spring, seasons they do not agree
                     Our love's defined inessential, citizens they do not agree
                
                     They talked of money and status - her intentions of love
                Happens in a heartbeat - whatever reasons they do not agree
                    
                    Have you ever been in love where you're blinded and equal?
                        Conflicting to compatible - horizons they do not agree

                              For my eyes are growing old and gap is too wide
            I was accused and she was judged, our emotions they do not agree

                          However, we'll sing and dance like nobody's watching
                  Better to be hated for than to break a person they do not agree.




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  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Arden, enjoyable tale of elderly romance, Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Arden, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:23:00 AM
    love the way you penned this one and the repeating phrase....great work Arden...congrats on your win :)

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/13/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Sandra! I appreciate that! Be safe my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Arden

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/13/2013 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Dr. Mehta! Take care always my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Arden dear you must decide if NOT AGREE is your repeated phrase all the words before it MUST RHYME ex: line 1 the word before NOT AGREE is DO, so in line 2 [WILL doesn't rhyme with DO] try repeating the whole phrase THEY DO NOT AGREE use seasons as your rhyming word, you'll have a lot of choices then. REASON, SEASON, TREASON,shun, begun, undone - it's ok if its not perfect rhyme] let me know if you want me to wait while you work on it okies? Light & Love

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/8/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Done with it, Debbie! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/8/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, thanks for this advice Debbie! I made this one quick hoping to still meet your deadline. I didn't realize that not until I logged-in today and read this piece again. I sent you a mail. Let me do some changes then. Lovelots. Take care my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Den: I greatly admire how you can stretch your writing across different forms while not sounding contrived or tortured. I read this one several times because there's so much going on. The poem evokes well the craziness of love.

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/8/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Such a wonderful observation! I appreciate how run throughout each lines. Love your thoughts, Mark! More power to you my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Sentimental inclined to emotional expressions on love

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/8/2013 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Dr. Mehta! I appreciate your words so much! Take care my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 8:56:00 AM
    arde, seems you're talking about freddie aguilar.. have you heard the news?... a smashing, mellow write... aliw to the max..:) huggs

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/8/2013 2:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So-so, Nette! Hehehe! Yap! I heard and even watched it on t.v! A sweet comment from a great poet! Wow! If you're here in the Phils., be safe and take care! Grabe si bagyong Yolanda eh! Ingat much, Nette! More prayers! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:39:00 AM
    - Beautiful thoughts ... beautiful poem. - Those who do not dare .... will not win... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/7/2013 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Anne! I'm happy with your visit. We live. We love. We dare. Love and life are like fighting a big battle that even if it means death, we still pursue, believing hat we are worth fighting for! I miss you, Anne! Take care! Bless you. Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Love is all we need .

    Gopela Avatar Arden Gopela
    Date: 11/7/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit on my page, Kiran! You're right! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:07:00 AM
    Love is blind as they say! Its a spark we can't tell where to strike and sometimes, its drives you crazy when you found out that you fall in love to someone whom you are not imagining of. Age, status, race, color and differences will be taken out of the list, so long as we experience the, "Magic of Love". Love,love,love! :-) - Den