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A Rational Explanation

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A Rational Explanation

What must I do to see this through-
Unlock the world I never knew? 
For all I've seen hath been untrue,
As all I've felt hath plagued me, too!
I am no more, past Deaths before 
I've reached the end of Living War-
(To see through eyes both blind and closed)
A life to touch, but never know...

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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Chan my friend Another heartfelt and lesson learning write. You always no how to capture the attention of the reader and keep them enthralled. Great job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Life poem. Love and hugs

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    Date: 12/9/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much love and many hugs to you, my cherished friend <3
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:43:00 AM
    You are on a roll Arhaic! So well expressed and dripping with truth.

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    Date: 11/5/2013 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks as always, Richard; I appreciate it, my friend! :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:16:00 AM
    This eight-line rhyming poem is crystal clear to me. There are many who touch, but never know, such is the sad lament . . .

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    Date: 11/4/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Jerry; thanks for dropping by and for the read and review; I sincerely appreciate it :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:21:00 AM
    What a fine expression, A life to touch, but never know....AP

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    Date: 11/4/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the read and review, Doc; I always appreciate it when you drop by :)