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within one's eyes

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within one's eyes

rising from cold bones
breaking loose
from iron shackles
in foggy darkness
coming out
of twilight shadows
i saw you

eyes burning red
passion within
opened hands
in awe
held to the lips
beautiful soul
kneeling before you
a goddess
clad in sunlight

sparkling lady
the angels chant
sweet smelling skin
that of rosewood
a dancing soul
inner eye
glowing red
passion within

deep inner being 
lips they curl
pouting as if kissed
sweetly craving 
a yearning within
the deepest chamber
cradling you love
within a warm glow

as darkness
is washed away
they beg 
to kiss
lips moist 
upon your soul

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  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Amazingly beautiful! Congrats on a wonderful piece yet again.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:08:00 PM
    Once again you enchant with your beautiful words Liam, thanks for the read...Peter

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:36:00 PM
    I love the scent of rosewood.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.Mesmerizing is the exact word Liam..thankyou : ) Going to my fvs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Absolutely enchanting.....