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Horrorscope

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Horrorscope

In your eyes, see Galaxies
(And the Soul's vast constellations)
A need to fill self-prophecy,
To seek my own self-validation!
To Orion's Belt, by Pisces Fin,
I strive to change myself again...
Polaris guides to Leo's Pride-
But Scorpio hath pierced my skin!

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:24:00 PM
    - A clever and interesting poem - do you reading horoscopes ? - I'm LION ..... what tells the lion you ? - Have a nice weekend J.T.A. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 11/3/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Anne Lise; I do enjoy horoscopes and astrology. I'm a Gemini. I have had many good friends who are Leo's; I know you all are a loyal bunch. Thanks for the read and reply! :)
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 1:55:00 PM
    I'm a Scorpio, too... Very imaginative write... Quite brilliant actually...

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    Date: 11/2/2013 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind words, Carol; much appreciated, always :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Hey! I know....I know.....how did you know I'm a Scorpio? Mr.Just! your works are Just! (: )Jenish.

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    Date: 11/2/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hope that's a good thing; thanks for reading, Jenish.
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Ouch!! I hope you've over the sting by now. Lovely poetry, as ever, TAP. Licia :-)

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    Date: 11/2/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, yeah; the ex was a loooong time ago, but my bf still stings me from time to time. Thanks so much, D :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:20:00 PM
    Chan The Man This is creative and unique. Hey you put pisces in there. Thats me. A fishy. LOL Nice job my friend. Hugs and Love

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    Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoyed, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Ouch! for Scorpio... I am Leo and remain unscathed.... I love this one and having a great time just reading your newest titles :)

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    Date: 11/2/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, K; glad you're back <3
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:51:00 PM
    brief but with a heavily laden with expert word play.my kind of stuff.not bad..

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    Date: 11/1/2013 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the read and reply :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:29:00 PM
    A I enjoyed the pun in your title. I'm a Scorpio too. Thanks for sharing. Friend, JM

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    Date: 11/1/2013 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always for the review, my friend! My best friend of 20 years and my ex-boyfriend are Scorpio's so that last line is about them ;)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:34:00 AM
    i like your play on words in this piece... the signs seem to have something to do with the course of our lives, so some say...good write :)

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    Date: 11/1/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the read and reply, Sandra; much appreciated :)