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Bell's on the Wind

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Bell's on the Wind

Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon

torn nails shred the bell cord
tin the sound in wind wails tinkle, tinkle

the might of death, a spasms rise
no heart beat but a curse
arise, arise, on full moon’s pull
to feed a need
a zombie hull


Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon

no smile, no scream, no blush the rose
arm thrust horror births
skin with bits of cloth
stand now, bone bare in places
long in tooth
to feed
to feed
the Blood Moon’s Curse


Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon
wait not, want not, run and hide
for hunger never ending rises
death but not
pain and hell
cursed they rise
	too soon.


Date: 11/1/13
Poet: Daphne Rising



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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:40:00 AM

    A very elegant, yet creepy poem, Debbie! I really love this one! It reminded me of "The Premature Burial", by Edgar Allan Poe. I think I will add this to my favorites!...Thank you so much for all of the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:18:00 AM

    lovely Debbie congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 3:19:00 PM

    This poem is well put together. Nice win Debbie...Roger

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Very well organized, Debbie. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:31:00 AM

    cool..... congratulations debs xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM

    ha, Nice in seeing this one again.. , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:24:00 PM

    I feel like I'm stuck in a horror movie with no place to hide. Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Great writing and great win. Congratulations on your no. 1 Debbie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:22:00 PM

    I'm glad Leonora saw the genius of this one. Congrats AGAIN. hahaha and it is up at the top where it belongs.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Debbie, you rock.... . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Bravo Deb---er Daphne--an honor to share the podium with this poem!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:21:00 AM

    I always adore the way you write your art Debbie, I can feel the sense of eerie, beautiful and amazed at the same time, congrats for the first place, this is extremely splendid! Wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny *straight to my fave list :D

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:36:00 AM

    I enjoyed this one very much. You created a intresting mood with your words. who is Daphne Rising??

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:46:00 AM

    - Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem, Debbie !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Congratulations my dear friend Debbie Daph on your well-deserved super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie...loved this the first time I read it...it is an awesome poem...

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:08:00 PM

    I remember this one and it's A VERY WELL DESERVED win. Congrats in PD's contest.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:25:00 PM

    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Congrats Debbie, A wonderful poem and a nice win... Roger

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:03:00 AM

    Debbie, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Scary zombie poem Debbie, very creepy and full of imagery. Thanks for the feedback, I was afraid that I had missed a direction or two on the ghazal,will make changes.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 10:28:00 AM

    IT IS JUST WOWWOWOWOWOW I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM A LOT AND THANKS FOR A NICE COMMENT ON MY POEM

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 7:46:00 AM

    Dear Debbie - Now this is why I never go to horror movies. This poem does not need the screen to bring upon me the creepy creeps. "skin with bits of cloth stand now, bone bare in places" I'm staying out of grave yards. Remember that when I'm gone. (although I guess I'm in no danger if I'm already dead) lvoe, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Touches one's bell in the heart making it produce a sound supreme!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 2:47:00 PM

    There is a dark side of the moon ! :) !!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Loved how the suspense just kept rising.....nice!!!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Indeed a frightful poem...kudos! Thanks for ur lovely comments,I appreciate. Glory b to God Most Hight! Bob_based on belief

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:35:00 PM

    The play on the repetition works so well in developing the drama like the music in Jaws.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:39:00 PM

    Wow! this is really great my dear friend Deb. I read it aloud and this made it real tip-top! Thank you so much! ;) Thanks a lot as well for taking some of your precious time reading my simple pieces! Have a great day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Debbie, a great poem. By the way your biography very impressive.Alternate medicine a great option for today's youth with umpteen number of syndromes.I will visit your site.I'll make it a point to visit your poems. Great. (: ) Jenish.

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