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rough rider Jim Jack senryu

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rough rider Jim Jack senryu

Rough Rider Jim Jack            (Senryu)

rough rider Jim Jack                          
ride a horse and poke its back
falls on dung and splash 

By dr Ko Ko Thein
Salt Lake City


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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:34:00 PM

    My hatred for this is only exceeded by my disdain for it.

    Thein Avatar Mya Thein Date: 10/29/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why so much hatred and despise for a humorous senryu. After all it is only humor poem.