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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:41:00 AM

    haha, yes the spell... How delightful... Thanks for the refreshing description, on how and why we fall captive, to nature herself... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:39:00 AM

    A delightful tumble! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:49:00 PM

    congratulations... PD

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:32:00 PM

    Yasmin, lovely transition from fall to spring, congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Great winning work..Way to go...Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:23:00 PM

    You captured the contrasting beauty of both seasons. Congrats, Yasmin!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 4:43:00 AM

    - Congrats on your fine win, Yasmin. - Have a great weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:10:00 AM

    my, mareey... so breathtaking!... sweet cheers to you,my dear..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:32:00 PM

    oh I just love this one!! How good to finally see it on this winner list. Congrats, sweet friend.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 7:37:00 PM

    I knew this one would do well...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Wow......this year, and the seasons have passed so fluently by your beautiful imagination!! Lovely poem! Congratulations Yasmin !!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Loved this one, Yasmin and many congrats on your remarkable win in the contest! Have a great day, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:56:00 AM

    Hi yasmin lovely to be congratulating you on a superb win love xx

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:13:00 PM

    Yasmin. Great job on your win. Grats! CTB

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:00:00 PM

    Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Yasmin

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:27:00 AM

    very nicely crafted the seasons blend beneath your pen... good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:26:00 PM

    packed with shining imprints of seasons, mareey... i love this; it's so you.. : hugggs.. you okay?

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:40:00 PM

    A truly outstanding work of art! I have never tried one of these Yasmin, but you make it seem easy. I am quite sure it is not!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Wow Jasmine, I'm scared to death of this form but you sure did nail it!...Beautiful stuff from The Flower of the East - Tim

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:03:00 AM

    yasmin, each word leads to the next awesome scene to finally complete a glorious picture. Beautiful

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:52:00 PM

    love the transition of seasons through words. A brilliant concept. SuZ

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:38:00 PM

    This is a spectacular write my friend, you have portrayed autumn and spring with perfect beauty Yasmin! I do have to tell you that within the central line the first two words are autumn's descriptions and the second two words are spring's descriptions, not all autumns like you have it! I just thought you would like to know that if this is for the contest! I really love the jack-o-lanterns part of the line, try and keep that in there somehow maybe! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:58:00 PM

    - JUST BEAUTIFUL, YASMIN! - Good luck in the contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:35:00 PM

    What can I say Yasmin, this is crazy gorgeous as all your other poetry love. Wishing you a great week. Hugs and love, Gail