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Glad-He-Ate-Her

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Glad-He-Ate-Her

Thrust a sword into my gut;
Save me from this mindless rut! 
Armor, shield- an open field 
(To guide my hands with luck) 
One by one 'til all are killed;
Beaten, Bashed, Bested- Struck!

*Play on "Gladiator" 

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  1. Date: 11/25/2013 7:52:00 AM
    OOPS, CHAN. YOU'RE A GREAT ANIMATOR. I SEE PICTURES WHENEVER I READ YOUR POEMS. THANKS FOR SHARING. FRIEND, JM

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/25/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you are able to visualize my poems, JM. I've long feared I rely too heavily upon emotion rather than painting an image in the reader's mind. Makes me happy to know you can see something as well as feel this piece. I always look forward to your reviews, my friend :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:36:00 PM
    Chan This is an interesting write. Its unique and different. Makes the reader think. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Fairy Tale poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/31/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for popping in, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:55:00 AM
    Sorry I don't get the title differences, whose the her that he ate. why and where is the double meaning in the title?

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/29/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's just a play on words for fun. There is no "he" or "she". Guess this one's a dud for sure lol