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Around in Circles

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Around in Circles

On shards of glass I would gladly rest, 
To ease my Mind, but I think it best
To sleep upon a wave's cool crest- 
Lying gently on my Lovers' breast 
By impulsive choices I am caught, 
I surrendered, though valiantly fought!
And all this searching hasn't brought 
Me any closer to the Truth I've sought

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:29:00 PM

    Chan This is a different and intriguing piece. Makes the reader think about answers to this and questions in their lives Nice job Thanks for the awesome and flattering comments on my Heartfelt poem. hugs and love Sweet pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review, Sweet Pea! :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:35:00 AM

    An interesting rhyme structure, which, nevertheless, isn't tedious or contrived, as is usually the case. I liked it very much. Mark

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/29/2013 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the read and review, Mark; I appreciate the compliments and for stopping by :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:29:00 AM

    I like this mate, the words run deep in this short piece. Wonderful as always. =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/27/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is an old piece that had to be reworked before I submitted it. Aside from the last 2 lines, I think, overall, the piece is weak and disjointed. But thanks as always for the review, Tom :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 5:42:00 PM

    This is one of your best, adding to my favorites, also deserves a 7!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/26/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    crap that should have said "NOT particularly proud" lol
    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/26/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow; thanks, Richard. I'm particularly proud of this piece, but am happy to know someone appreciates it. Thanks, my friend :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 12:10:00 PM

    Ahh!! Great rhythm and flow to this one..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/26/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks as always, Sara. Enjoyed reading your new pieces. Thanks for dropping by and for the review :)