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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:13:00 AM
    I feel the collages in your heart, and how you hold them very dear... Julie, i had to shake my head once, from the trance.. on how this is straight from your heart and soul. You are free to believe in Paradise... I know I am tough on my heart, --- sad reasons.. But, somehow you tickled a spot in my mind, and made me believe it is out there, My HEART KNOWS and feels... Thank you for the warm feeling..LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 6:00:00 PM
    A beautiful place I your Poem..good luck Julie....

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:29:00 PM
    I sincerely hope that you do Julie, I really enjoyed this gem of a poem. thank you for sharing...peter

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:40:00 AM
    As long as we believe in Paradise and Afterlife, we can feel blessed with this Hope that soothes our soul, when "losing" loved ones: we never lose them!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:51:00 AM
    Wow I agree very beautiful but sad. Im sure our paradise awaits us all with our loved ones there to greet us.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 7:01:00 PM
    such a poignant piece yet beautifully written...I think all of us can relate to this one so it tugs at the readers heartstrings.. lovely write! hugs

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Julie, this has a very beautiful sadness about it. Yes, I, too, am certain that there is an afterworld where all the souls have an eternal banquet. :) Also, an equally devastating song by Lenka entitled "Nothing" came to mind after reading this piece. I hope you're alright.