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Hidden Secrets

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Hidden Secrets

                   
                   
  Twinkling little
balls of gases in
the sky.
             
Millions upon
millions as I look
up. How in the world
did you get there? 
                   
        Making me
feel as if I am lost
in your world. So 
 dark and majestic
but your little
lights fascinating
me every second when
there is           
                   
           
darkness. 
                   
 Oh wait but there
are these figures
hidden between you.
                   
  Only some certain
eyes can see your
hidden secrets. 
                   
          Stare at
your wonderful
patterns forever. 
                 
Why are you
disappearing when it
begins to lighten? 
                   
   One by one your
beautiful patterns
begin to fade.
                   
                   
          Don't go
now.
                   
   Soon enough light
has fully taken
over.
                   
        Your
patterns are now
gone. 
   As darkness comes
again you soon start
to reveal yourself
one by one again
each and every time
being even more
fascinating.

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  1. Date: 12/22/2013 8:34:00 PM

    This a beautiful poem going straight to my favorites! Such a talented writer!! Write on! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:07:00 PM

    The mark of a great poet/poetess is that when they find the answers to their questions posed they share it.... I don't know that to be a fact, but it sounds good. You have posted another pleasant read.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:47:00 PM

    you have asked this question well, something I ponder at times when searching for answers to my own life.