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A Vida Loca

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A Vida Loca

A Vida Loca Why do people live a vida loca? Maybe they didn't have a good guidance, or maybe they just picked the wrong kind of friends. It could be that they think - they got it all together and to them nothing else matters. They forget their famlies and everything - for a vida loca is their only dream. A vida loca, you can find anywhere. Don't fall in that trap, or you may never get out of there. A lot of kids live la vida loca. They think of that life as peaches and cream. In a vida loca you can find everything - from sex to drugs and pleasures to fulfill your fantasy dreams, but that's all they are - fantasy dreams. Wake up, wake up, before it's too late. come back to reality or your fantasy dreams will become a nightmare of broken dreams...
10/25/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 12:19:00 AM
    It is true vida loca is a great fantasys dream illusion, reality is hard but you must face it head on. very good write and thank you for your comments.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Very nice advice to the young people present generation those are living the crazy life with false fantasy. Beautiful poem, enjoyed. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Hola Lucilla, The body is a temple! Bien hecho.. ken

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Hi there, I luved this one, but I admit, make me listen to the Rickey Martin song and wish to live a little crazy!!!! :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:12:00 PM
    Reminds me of the Ricky Martin hit song.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:16:00 PM
    I remember those days Lucy, though no drugs or alcohol , music, girls, fast cars and some footloose travelling were enough adrenaline for me, Great poem of a warning nature. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Oh yes Lucilla, I lived like that for years, until I started to grow up in my sixties. I done untold damage toy mind and body. I loved your poem my friend....Peter

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Each person has their own dreams and nightmares, I'm happy you have found your own way. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:53:00 PM
    To live a "Vida Loca" is not to live at all for how can one live when ignores what life is in the first place? Excellent message!

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:30:00 PM
    I don't know what kind of life i live Lucy,,, all I know is that I lived a life that was far from VIDA LOCA... well i did wake up, and I live a fine life... sending hugs to you my dear friend... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:59:00 AM
    .... living in a "dream world" .... yes, wake up! - Well written, Lucilla! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:27:00 AM
    A vida loca is quite new to me but I could gasp what it should be draining away the youth, Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:06:00 AM
    I never had a vida loca. Kinda wish I did, well not THAT crazy. haha. A good message for us, sweet lady.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:01:00 PM
    This is so true with what this poem is saying. Kids please wake up to the reality of life. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:47:00 PM
    You speak the truth my friend, complete and honest facts! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this evening, a masterful poem! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:59:00 PM
    tis to true and the rest is silence............