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Tiny Dancer

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Tiny Dancer

  

                         Ballerina
                         soft pink
                dancing, acting, performing
            Artist, musician, poetess, magician
              entrancing, captivating, giving
                       tiny dancer
                     Granddaughter

                   










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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
    soup mail in less than 5 minutes

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/27/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sweety , I have not been responding very much at all to the soup mail. I do apologize , if I am not responsive to anyone's mail , at this point ~ Love and warmth to you .
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Shannity, , Congratulations on your Diamente~ xox~ LINDA

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/27/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Darling ,
  1. Date: 11/16/2013 3:10:00 PM
    Love this transition from the young granddaughter to the full grown ballerina, Shanity, congratulations on your win.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ! Every time it is read , I feel I am honoring "Trinity "
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sara, I am soon reading the Contest I sponsored , realizing it is quite a responsibility !
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:19:00 AM
    very delicately done!.. sweet winning cheers to you, shanity!..:) huggs

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nette ! I love that name !!
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:48:00 PM
    this one is pure sweetness. Congrats to you, Shanity.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Andrea, I love the simple ness of this ! New style for me as well .
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 7:35:00 PM
    I could picture her there...my daughter was a little ballerina at a young age... you did a great job with this form...congrats on your win :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sandra , I can see her now !
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:38:00 PM
    Hi Shanity......I have a granddaughter who is also a tiny, captivating ballerina.....so I could identify with this topic......so sweet!!!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes , we are dance Moms ! and dance grand moms !
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Shanity---A lovely diamante and many congrats on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! I know I had a blast participating in this contest! It's great to experiment with new styles of poetry....well done with this poetic form! Enjoy your day, Julie :-)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/17/2013 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, and Congratulations to you ! I se you taking 1st place quite often !! Love , Shanity Rain:)
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 5:10:00 AM
    more congratulations on another win Shanity well done xx

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/14/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you sweet girl ! Love to you , SR.
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:23:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Shanity

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/14/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Dr. I have been inspired by your contest from the start , for you have pushed me into different forms of poetry , so there fore you are a Teacher , as well as a Doctor ~ Honored :) Shanity Rain.
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
    Simple and beautiful :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/14/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you beautiful Lady ! It is about my Granddaughter "Trinity Faith " perfect form , for she is a Diamond !
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 1:03:00 PM
    The tiny dancer so fluid in her motion causing us all to stop and wonder at the emotion in her movements...Very nice! Granddaughter...you...nope, not buying it! nice try though! MC

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/14/2013 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well , My Grand daughter , yes! Trinity faith ~ she is as beautiful as I write and more, I had a dream about her before she was born , a white light surrounds her and Mom ~ Thanks , SR.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Your words are magical and lyrical.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/26/2013 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are absolutely adorable ! you are a sweet friend , one in my life. I would love to have coffee with . I have a book that needs the final review , Then I can give more time, your comments are giving me warmth and love ..thank-you so much ! My New friend forever !
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry, Shanity

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/26/2013 3:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Doctor for the inspiration ! you always challenge me to write a different style !