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  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:25:00 PM
    This was amazing. Your a very good story teller.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/2/2013 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) I'm afraid my imagination can be all over the place... just glad it still works! Thank you Damien
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 1:33:00 AM
    Beautiful Flo, so so romantic. Now i cant wait to check out the continuation

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/13/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You did get to read it! lol....you'll be happy with that one as well ;)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:50:00 PM
    My dear F.J. Brilliant! This is an unparalleled work of art. I was gripped by every thought you penned. You are incredibly talented and my favorite Poetess!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is a compliment I have never received; from the bottom of my heart, thank you Sarai.
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:30:00 PM
    Pleasantly sensual... Well written and tastefully presented.... I couldn't ask for more.... Jake

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for the kind compliment; I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Oh my, oh my!!! My dear Florestine... this was an absolutely beautiful expression of what true love should always be!!! It's not an act... it is a display of true true love and affection! Love and big hugs, Jack xoxoxxox

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/29/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thank you Jack....I have always loved a storm; the rain can be so comforting.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:26:00 PM
    - Love this F.J ... beautiful .... beautiful and romantic!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/27/2013 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you as always Anne; glad you're still supporting the many writers here :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:50:00 PM
    excellent write FJ....a storm of sensuality...thanks for stopping by....

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/26/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph!
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Very sensuous and romantic expressions, F.J.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/25/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by so to speak :) I was missing my husband and the rain is one of my favorite parts of nature when it is at peace so this was the result of that moment.
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:27:00 AM
    Massively intense. I knew there was a reason I love the rain so much. Lightly sensual & romantic setting. The best part about this...it was unplanned. It just happened without hesitation. Excellent job.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/25/2013 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake; the rain can take on many different qualities can't it?! :)