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I Heard Your Words

I heard your words 
                  And not one to my liking
On a cool fall day, you say I have to leave 
              You are taking me to a deserted island
                                                        to spend my last days 
                                   alone
To fend for myself if only I can
 
You say I can only take three things 
                             I don't like your tone
Like a fog horn you sound
                             Telling me I am to be put out 
Reminding me of the tale of the Eskimo tribe who 
               put their elderly on floating ice to let them die or fall prey to wild animals

You say you will let me carry three things from our wordly possessions
                               And  none of my family whom I hold dear


You say I can not carry the Crepe Myrtle ablaze like a fireball lighted by
              Autumn's angular sun
You say I can not carry a Georgia Pine whose last year's needles have turned
                                                  Amber
You say I can not carry the Pear Tree still laden with ripening pears
You say I can not carry the Red Bud, nor the Yellow Maple, nor a Ginko
                           whose leaves have refused to turn gold
You say I can carry only three things 'pon this last journey

You say I can not carry the Autumn breeze which cools the trees
You say I can not carry the Mockingbird nor the Red Cardinal

Only three things 'pon my journey 

I have my faith, my imagination, and photos stored in memory that you can not~
no~ never ever take away....

On this trip I will take my Bible, my magical suit case and tackle box...

Later the rest of the story


Finis'
Contest: What Would You Take?
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 
Written: October 23, 2013

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Take me with you, Sara, old friend. Love this one mucho. congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Sara, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:42:00 PM

    Sara , nicely done.... congrats in Shadow's contest.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:20:00 AM

    Wow ! There is much to learn from you.. wonderful , amazing poem . Excellent win !

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:06:00 AM

    a grand winner indeed...an excellent piece!! congratulations on your win friend Sara. Cheers!!!! :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Geez, no wonder you scooped the top prize with this write. This is good poetry, Sara. Congratulations and well-done with this superb piece. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:31:00 AM

    a well-defined piece, sara.. sweet congrats on your win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:11:00 AM

    Many congratulations Sara another fine win well done xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win! much deserved!!! Blessings, Stacey

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:17:00 PM

    Well done Sara, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:08:00 PM

    wow...love the way you penned this one Sara...very well crafted, congrats on your first place win :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:25:00 PM

    You went way beyond my wildest expectation. Congratulations on a truly magnificent poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:58:00 PM

    congrats on your win Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Oh Sara..I'm so glad to see your wonderful poem here on top...well deserved....congratulations

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:37:00 PM

    congrats Sara cant wait to read the rest....Seren

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:53:00 PM

    An exceptional good write Sara, congrats on your 1st place win love xxx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:04:00 PM

    congrats on win Sara with this enchanting poem

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:29:00 AM

    Great write Sara. I sincerely enjoyed IT. Thanks for sharing with me. JM

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:08:00 PM

    Real great imagination and scope on the theme here Sara; hope you achieve good results in that contest..!

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Fine very fine what you will take and what no one can take from you. I loved last three lines what you will take at your choice. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 12:37:00 PM

    enjoyed how you took this theme and made it your own with such powerful display of will, sara.. yes, the three things you shall take will make life more endearing... just awesome!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:01:00 AM

    You are a wonderful poet Sara,, and this just as to add to your diversity,, amazing poetry sure will do very well in Shadows contest...

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 10:44:00 AM

    I think you just won yourself a contest Sarah...eitherway this is eexcellent....

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 10:43:00 AM

    The Bible, most important on a deserted island, except I'd have to bring my reading glasses as my second item. I'd love to know what is in your "magical suitcase"! If it's like Mary Poppins' carpet bag and can pull out anything you wish, then you have it made!! :) I love how you mentioned those things which you'd miss but can't take with you... I love your poem Sara and I do hope you'll feel better soon. Hugs

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Excellent. A significant piece of write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:40:00 PM

    wow, this is an EXCELLENT way to do that contest. Wish I had thought of such an incredible idea!!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Very spirtual write I can relate to what you were trying to say in this write, the emotional expression quite beautiful. also thank you for your comments on my write.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:34:00 PM

    This is a perfect ending to what I have read earlier today my friend! What exactly would be a magical suit case? That intrigued me greatly, I'm curious as to its function (besides holding clothes)! I love your two other items you would take, of course the Bible is a must, and a tackle box, great idea! Your poem here is tremendous, I really enjoyed reading it tonight! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:33:00 PM

    extremely beautiful. ..Skat

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:15:00 AM

    What a great beginning to an awesome poem to come! I really loved this significant piece! I hope to read this when you finish it! Excellent start!!

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