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Knock, Knock

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Knock, Knock

Please place patience upon my palms,
and put much Madness in my Heart.
Stir in my Soul, a somber song-
(Truth in Mind ere I depart)

My course is forced; what woe- remorse!
Thus from myself, at once divorced…
A sojourn at every turn-
and at my door, a Trojan Horse!

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  1. Date: 2/7/2014 12:14:00 PM
    Knock, Knock, aqui es toy. lol <--- did I spell it right. :) on the soup, I meant to say. No i am not ok. :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 2/7/2014 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sent you an email. My Spanish is terribly rusty lol
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 5:36:00 PM
    Miss you Chan. Hope you're okay :(

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 12/17/2013 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, FJ; have missed you as well :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Love the use of the Trojan horse. Had to read this after reading Debbie Guzzi's winning entry that was inspired by this. Excellent :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/13/2013 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks and much love, always, K <3 <3 :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:05:00 PM
    I really like the smooth flow of this! Great read aloud! Jimbo

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I sincerely appreciate the read and review, Jimbo; thanks for dropping by :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Nicely written, Archaic, enjoyed the read. Thanks again for your visits to my page :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Miss Wattie, and I enjoyed reading your pieces :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Bravo, Tap!! I love the alliteration you have going in the first stanza. Sure you could do with more madness? I have loads to get rid of. Nice one, my eloquent friend. Licia :-)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol You're right, D; I don't need any more madness. I appreciate the review and compliments :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:42:00 PM
    The Trojan horse I sure won't be, dear Archaic Poet Friend! i'm just knockin' in to feed my hungry soul and I must say, I can go satisfied and more curious about your new rhymes! Love, Hanitra

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for popping in, V; I appreciate the read and review :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Ha ha, a very clever write!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/24/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, bud; always good to hear from you :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:38:00 PM
    very nicely penned...I enjoyed the read

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/24/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the review, Joseph! :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 6:46:00 AM
    Lovely song of the heart, AP

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Doc; this one is hot off the presses lol ;)