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Sharing The Night We're Under

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Sharing The Night We're Under

The sky 
has lost
its bluish hue,
it's gone from
bright to dark

The moon
and stars 
arrive in view,
to light a sky
once stark

I watch
the sky from
where I am,
my thoughts
begin to stray

I know
my sky is
what you see,
though you're
so far away

My stars
you gaze
so infinite,
their schemes
you also see

I'm ailed
you see my
"man in moon",
much more than
you see me

My heart
stays heavy
as we’re together
as often as moons
are blue

Though far
apart, at least
I share, my
nightly sky
with you 

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  1. Date: 11/5/2013 1:22:00 AM
    Awwwwwww....very romantic and sweet....True love portrayed so well....

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
    M.C. I love your flow it's sweet and sincere. Hope all is well, enjoy your weekend:0) Cherie

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Romantic, are we? Lovely rhyming you have going here, MC. Good poetry, my friend. Licia :-)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 11/1/2013 8:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You know Delysia, I try to be. :D I love writing about love, it's a great topic, always relevant, challenging because it's been written about since the very first poem was inked, and people usually seem to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and commenting Ms. Hendricks. MC
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, MC. I like its structure as well. Great rhymes and a pleasure to read. Enjoyed it very much; kudos! :)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 11/1/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my man! I try... Thanks for stopping by and reading, hope you continue to preview my modest inventory. MC
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:00:00 PM
    Hi MC, glad to see you here today... loving the bright skies in a lovers eyes... I know where my heart belongs when it'all gloomy gray... love this... LINDA

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 11/1/2013 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh Linda, do tell!!! LOL! Kidding, thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it. MC
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:24:00 PM
    LoL...I clearly remember a comment you made about me being lovey-dovey...well who is lovey-dovey now? Lmbo

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/25/2013 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Is this "lovey-dovey" really...??? =D Thanks, I hope that means you like it -LOL! MC
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:14:00 PM
    your post is beautiful in every way Marquis. ...love skat

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/23/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT! I figured I took enough of a break from writing -LOL! Actually I got a little busy and dealt with a little writer's block :) But I really appreciate your comment, thanks again!!! MC