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A WORLD OF HATE

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A WORLD OF HATE


creation commenced--Cain and Abel jealousy two brothers competing stalwartly hatred junction off- ramp taken blazing violence still cosmic warfare rages intense unceasingly assembled, standing as vengeance persists born protesting our fallen world obstinately strangely culture perceives tolerance ignorantly a Creator that keeps our friendship unconditionally no half-way house choice in His sovereignty “Don’t be surprised my brothers if the world hates you” 1 JOHN 3:13 © October 2013—Kim van Breda

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:01:00 AM
    fearless write with a creative power of its own, kim... enjoyed this hard-hitting work!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Your message and style of writing both are good.Nice to read it.....have a great day

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Litan. It is night time here our side of the tide on the South African continent. You have a great day too.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Hi Kim, nice to read your work again, I love the format of this, it flows then stops and holds you for a second, great message too, very well done...David

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David... not a very 'chirpy' topic, but my latest one, so thought I would post it.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Thanks for writing this poem. We do have all this. We livein a world of hate. I pray for peace. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your feedback Lucilla-- you are so right. Our world needs a lot of healing.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
    well crafted poem Kim...well penned..

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph. Not one of my better mood poems, but always appreciate feedback.