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Mist



     The village is draped;
     by curtain of choking cloud
     it struggles to breathe

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 6:23:00 PM

    Once again, nice poem. Just add an "e" to the end of "breath". You want the verb, not the noun.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive work..It has felt like that here some mornings lately.Sara

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Very interesting imagery. I very much liked this Haiku! Keep it up! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Great images, Linda

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:23:00 AM

    - Linda, very nice haiku !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)