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In dreams

In my dreams I fly to you
Hidden inside a wispy night 
Stars shining their twinkle light 
I sneak into your slumbered thoughts
of silken skin and auburn tresses 
Flowing like satin around your face
You moan and tremble as I trace 
my finger across your lips, your cheek,
Your eyes slowly open as you realize
I’m not a ghostly apparition
I’m that dream that you’ve been dreaming 
Your temptress, angel, your anything …
  
In my dreams I dance for you
Gracefully and unashamed
Illumined by the candle flame   
Exposed before you as you stare
I watch your eyes as they devour  
Mesmerized with every move I make 
You try in vain to speak my name
Pleading with those smoldering eyes
as I seduce and tantalize
Soft, feminine, sensual power
brings you to your knees 
in helpless desire … 

In my dreams you cannot move 
Motionless like a man in chains
Helplessly watching as I come near 
You feel my breath upon your skin
And drinking in your manly scent
The mix of pheromones and cologne
It drives me wild, I lose control  
Tasting you with every kiss
Exploring you with every touch 
I’m weakened by your solid form
And being near you I discover
I’ve no desire for another …

In my dreams I feel your strength
You’re reckless like an angry lion
hungry for its hunted meal 
You’ll wait no longer, I can feel you
bursting out of your restraints
Desiring to know me deeply    
Beck’ning me, I’m hypnotized,
Like a magnet, drawn to you 
You pull me in with just your eyes
Powerless, I’m fully open 
to the love you have for me 
I'm lost inside your every dream 


Feb 2013



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  1. Date: 3/3/2014 1:11:00 PM

    This is so good, I enjoyed reading it again Becca. I hope you're spirits are high. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 2:04:00 PM

    verrry nice

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 1/30/2014 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, James :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Rebecca... awesome...you really are a "Dreamweaver"....

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/26/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi KJ I wondered what happened to you, I haven't seen you! Glad to see you back :) a Dreamweaver oohhhh I love that!!! I do write about dreams a lot haha Thanks for stopping by!!!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:41:00 PM

    Rebecca... awesome...you really are a "Dreamweaver"....

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:25:00 PM

    vow you could set the reader on fire, now that is real molten emotion pouring out the scene....

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/26/2013 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hehe well..... yes I wrote it from the deepest part of me, where the molten emotion resides and is ready to pour out :) Thank you for your awesome comment :) !!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:09:00 AM

    WOW! Woman of wonderful words! I Love IN Dreams!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/26/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Chuck :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:20:00 AM

    Very nice. In my dreams I am sure it is "another" place more real than the place I experience with my physical senses, a place I "touch" with my mind, the only exact tool of perception where symbols of thought expressed in the purity of profound words wrought with universal meaning are more precise and perfect than mere sensations can provide. Fantastic expression here. Thanks.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/26/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow, this is really profound! Very interesting, Daniel, and I agree with you, dreams can sometimes be more real, or maybe on a different level, than reality! :) Awesome!
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:33:00 AM

    perfect in all ways

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/26/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Duncan :)
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Breath taking visual poem u have wriiten. Read it more than once.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/6/2013 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Lisa! <3
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:07:00 AM

    One could dream about your dreams,, these are so visual...

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/4/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:27:00 PM

    Nice imagination of romantic mood pictured beautifully., my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 11/4/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, thank you bl for your nice comment! :)
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 10:58:00 PM

    Ooh-la-la, me likes very much. I went through your poem twice and it just got better and better. Lovely write, my friend. Licia :-)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/31/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oooo well Licia.... I like very much that you like very much :) Thank you, lady! :) Hugs <3
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:40:00 AM

    A sensual and romantic breath of sultry air to dream on. . . .WOW! Loved it Becca!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/31/2013 11:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie :) I love getting WOWs from you :) ~hugs <3
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 7:24:00 PM

    Amazing poem. My angelic darling wife, Sherry, and I live a similar life as this poem. I idolize her.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/29/2013 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awww... well, if you continue to call her your angelic darling wife whom you idolize, I'm pretty sure you can count on having a wonderful marriage :) I'm sure she idolizes you too! Thank you for stopping by, Lionel :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:57:00 AM

    Dang, I wish I was him!!!!!!!! lol I really really enjoyed reading your work today...thank you for being sooooo talented!!!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/29/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha :) Pace! Thanks for making me smile today :) You're awesome.
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Cool poem!! Hot topic :) Enjoyed this piece-- it is a common fantasy I think most woman would have to admit to ;)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/29/2013 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have to admit, it was fun to write :) Thanks for stopping by, Kim!
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:56:00 AM

    Of course this goes to my fvs..Ow my how passionate your words sweet lady..Oozing with sensuality.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/29/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for putting this in your favorites, Charmaine! :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 2:21:00 PM

    Hi Becca, Just stopping by to say hello... Ken

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/29/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Ken! :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:20:00 AM

    Wow, this rather opened me up, and I found myself looking around, hoping no one was watching. Gulp. Mark

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/27/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Interesting. Good thing you didn't read it before I made the revisions to tone it down a little lol ... I'll put a warning on it . thanks
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:54:00 PM

    This beautiful, Becca! I went back and re-read it a couple of times!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/25/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, that is a compliment x 3 ! Thank you very much Miss Wattle!
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Excellent write, dear Becca! So romantic! Dreams last longer than reality, because they feed upon our unawareness of barriers or frontiers; they just joyuously jump over them! Thanks for making us feel free! Love, Hanitra

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/25/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw, I really love your comment Hanitra! Thank you so much! <3
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:48:00 AM

    Good night Becca

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:12:00 PM

    Tantalizing. Very well written and composed. I only blushed once or twice! :) Love it. ~Kilmer

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/24/2013 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your nice comment Kilmer :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:14:00 PM

    Becca, this is such a mesmerizing poem. I like how you switched the ending from your dreams to being lost in his dreams. Great lines all the way through. Excellent

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/24/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Karen!! :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:35:00 AM

    Excellent. Deep romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/24/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ravi!
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:52:00 PM

    If i had your dreams ! That's so good to read dear...well done.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/23/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Litan!
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:22:00 PM

    VERY sensuous writing, Becca. You are coming up with some awesome poetry these days. This reminds me of a sonnet I wrote once about being in a certain man's dream. Love this.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/23/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea! What is the name of your sonnet, I'd love to read it :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Hot, hot, hot. You nailed it, and phrased it, and wrote it with a drop of passionate persuasion. Just excellent, Becca. Allan

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/23/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, thank you Allan! I appreciate that! :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:16:00 AM

    wow...so sensual ....well penned Becca

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/23/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joseph xo
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 6:57:00 AM

    - I will not wake you from romantic and sweet dreams Becca ..... beautiful poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/23/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you for letting me sleep Anne-Lise :) xoxo
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