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  1. Date: 12/22/2013 3:16:00 AM
    Amazing job, beautifully crafted, enjoy reading.... Take care ....Ellie...

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Becca, Another masterful.artistic presentation about a leaf with a picturesque analogy to life brilliantly woven in! Becca! Becca! Becca!!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:36:00 AM
    and that is just beautiful

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 5:26:00 AM
    a powerful deep write Becca many layers to this superb write kudos Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Awesome write...we must remember that sometimes we have to take a leap of faith!

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:02:00 PM
    I can relate to this little leaf, all to well...We want to let go and be free. But, we don't want to fall without a safety net...I love this poem, Becca! Wonderful work! I am adding it to my favorites!...Thank you very much for the great comments!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Great write about that poor leaf hanging on for dear life. Awesome observation, Becca. Lovely rhyming here, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Great poetic quality..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Enjoyed reading it..Turning loose must have the leaf sore afraid..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am still ill but it is bound to turn around soon..Sara

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Enjoyed your beautiful poem Becca....depicted autumn nicely and original...I could visualize that last little leaf...PS...when you pour the glob of pretzels and chocolate out...use two forks to pull them out into a single layer to dry them break great...

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:20:00 AM
    beautiful write Becca....I love it....fav....hugs

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:47:00 AM
    becca, I really enjoyed your personification of that little leaf. GREAT poem, sweetie.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:02:00 AM
    This is MOST brilliantly written! Drake's comment really said it all my dear Rebecca! You know we're all here for you... big hugs milady xoxox

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:37:00 AM
    What an excellent metophor. I can so relate to this I stayed in a job I hated for longer than I should of because I was afraid to let go. All along God was ready to catch me.

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    Date: 10/21/2013 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Becca!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 4:55:00 AM
    The faith in ourselves, that is emanating by our faith in HIM, is the force that will defy gravity and let us float to our destiny's call! Excellent poem, dear Becca a fine metaphor that deserves a 7!

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 12:44:00 AM
    Sometimes, to fall, is really to fly. Deep lines.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery, Becca :) Thoroughly enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Wow, wonderful write Becca. Now you got me wondering where that leaf is going to end up. I've often looked at the last few leaves on trees as I've passed an watched for next time to see how long they can hold on, yes, I know, I'm sad lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Very nice, Becca. I like the analogy used here to interpret a lady as a leaf. Very well done. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Wow, I just love the imagery within this incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading about the lone leaf trying to hold on as he is too afraid to let go, such a grand metaphor Becca! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Ow that little leaf..She deserves the soft light lavender hue of velvet petals to carpet the soil when It (she)falls..So sentimental this is..A brave leaf she is with the most inner and outer beauty