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OTHERWISE DEMENTIA ITSELF IS HELPLESS

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OTHERWISE DEMENTIA ITSELF IS HELPLESS

                                          I forget the things I keep
                                  they are cluttered up and not in order
                                          when I need one of them
                                         I search and try to find out
                                     sometimes I get sometimes not 
                         If not got I feel angry my patience stops to work
                                        I feel suffering like dementia
                                 After sometime with cool mind I thought 
                                a strategy to overcome this daily problem                                        I                           determined to keep the things in proper places
                                       where from they are to be taken
                                 Suddenly a question pierced in to my mind
                                       if I keep my eyes in place of nose 
                                              will it be possible to see? 
                                     In return an answer flashes with in me
                                      proper things must be in proper place
                                       otherwise dementia itself is helpless

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:32:00 PM
    funny one about dementia. BL. I enjoyed the joke about eyes in place of nose.

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 10/21/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! my lovely friend, it's funny but serious. Thanks always............... Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 2:02:00 PM
    - .... So are we all .... regardless of age ... well written, bl !!! - :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 10/21/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! my lovely friend, thanks always....... Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 11:52:00 AM
    a nice poem ,enjoyed.

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    Date: 10/20/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for saying nice. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Orderly surroundings does help with when a person gets older and has dementia..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...The apple-wine tastes like rotten apples and rotten grapes..Ha!! Ha!!..I don't like the fermented flavor..Sara