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Loving Miss Grey

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Loving Miss Grey

He spent the whole night 
With little Miss Grey
The blander the better
She preferred it that way

He brought her flowers
She wished they were white
He wore a paisley tie
She said it was too bright

No lively conversation
She much preferred mundane
If he talked about sunshine
She would talk about the rain

The meal had little flavor
She neglected to add salt
A delicate constitution
It really was not her fault

She asked "please give me passion"
As she looked into his eyes
He placed her on the table
She opened up her thighs

Color flowed to her cheeks
Her skin began to glow
She matched his every motion
Moving fast and moving slow

Passion took him by surprise
Pleasure hit him like a wave
Releasing vibrant colors
This rainbow he wished to save

They retreated to her parlor
Beautifully bathed in her light
Transformation of Miss Grey
She became his Mrs Right



















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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Richard ...I enjoyed reading this...ur naughty..just kidding. ..cheers to this lady !

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Loved this one! A woman is like a book, the most amazing things can be hid inside a bland cover.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is so true.
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:19:00 PM
    gosh, this woman was quite the zombie herself until they made love. What the heck did he do for her? hahaha. I liked this. It's a very engaging poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:18:00 PM
    Zombie Land. Saw it and loved it!!! Now to see your poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/25/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My favorite zombie movie!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:56:00 PM
    With all their differences Miss Grey was his Mrs Right..I loved your intriguing story which captivated me till the end.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In reality I was attracted to a woman and we were opposites, it did not work out well. My wife mary and I have so much in common and it has been like living a dream these last 20 years.
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 4:02:00 AM
    Love it! :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Eileen for getting me to look at the last two stanzas
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 12:35:00 AM
    The "Mrs. Robinson" song kept repeating in my head during my read of this....for better or worse. =) Great vibe & word flow here.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake, the Graduate was a great movie and I do like that song.
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:07:00 PM
    From the very line and title you made me anxious to know what follows next, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr. Ram.
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 7:14:00 PM
    such a witty write Richard...love that miss gray became colorful in the end...enjoyed the journey through your words...great poem :) hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sandra.
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Miss Grey sure knew her stuff, hey? I loved this entertaining piece, Richard. Well done, my friend. Licia ;-)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Licia, glad to entertain!
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Little Miss Grey became Miss Rainbow....and why not? With that kind of pleasure...Lovely....Please check your mail, Richard...Thanks!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/20/2013 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Forgot this................... :)
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Haha..I was wondering where that was going.....

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    All the way apparently!
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 11:07:00 AM
    Yes, never judge a book by its cover Rick, the story inside might be just the best you've ever read. Take care, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You got that right Richard.;0)
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:54:00 AM
    fantastic Richard a wealth of emotions you travel through to a shattering climax great pen Shadow x smile hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like your choice of words *lol*
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:04:00 AM
    most excellent indeed, aside from the obvious creativity, the poem took me thru many different feelings in so short a span of time. Went from a little goofy and oddball, to embarrassed, to giggly leading into surprise and finally heart warming. Love it!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love this comment, if I could I would fav it.