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Zephyr

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Zephyr

Breeze Makes her Feel well when Drapery swell in Air. Soft touch She a blush He an ocean Breeze
=========== N.B.The contest Poetic Palindrome requires to write two Lanternes with the last word of Lanterne one and first word of the second Lanterne should be one. That's why there are nine lines instead of ten lines Dr. Ram Mehta 19-10-13

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Great Lanterne, Dr. Ram and all the best in the contest! Cleverly written.....I could feel the soft breeze in this piece! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 8:34:00 PM
    I admire your use of varied forms... It convinces me that you attempt to be a serious poet..... You meet the challenge well..... Regards... Jake

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    Date: 10/31/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I have attempted nearly 92 literary poetic forms till date
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Soft and beautiful!

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 7:21:00 PM
    A lovely piece, Dr. Mehta. I enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Natural rhythm is flashed from breeze to breeze. Good luck, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:17:00 AM
    not a form I know but the words flow beautifully Richard much enjoyed reading Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 12:45:00 AM
    This is a win to me ! I love it Doc, the simplicity , beautiful write .