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Tanka 9 - Salty and Sweet

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Tanka 9 - Salty and Sweet

	
	
	
	Tanka 9 – Salty & Sweet
	
	confidences shared
	imaginings on the air 
	whispering magic
	salty words & sweet red wine 
	fill the shallows of our mouths 
	
	
	
	


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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Jack, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT... Jack
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Jack, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Linda... Jack
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:34:00 AM
    happy cheers to you for your win, jack!..:) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nette... Jack
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the congrats, Sara
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Jack I think this is very beautiful....congratulations

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Donna. I always appreciate your comments... jack
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 9:13:00 AM
    i like this poem! congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Reading this one again, I now wish I'd put it higher on the list. Very nice one, Jack. Congrats in my contest.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the placement. I'm glad you enjoyed it... Jack
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:26:00 PM
    like magic in the wind. I want a taste of that wine. Your poem is fine Jack. salty and sweet ..... Good luck in the contest... SKAT

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/24/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Magic in the wind... I like that. Thanks, SKAT... Jack
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:28:00 PM
    - Wonderful work ,Jack! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/23/2013 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your support... Jack
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Hello Jack, This is a lovely tanka, so much said in such a way...Yummy indeed. tankas are some of my favs. This one especially. As Always, Shar

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/22/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliment and comment, Shar... Jack
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Fantastic! Damn yummy too!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/22/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My intention exactly. Have you read Debbie Guzzi's latest haiku? you should... Jack
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Such descriptive use of words in this Tanka-- well written.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/22/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the comment... Jack
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Jack...outstanding....I predict a winner here....big winner.....really loved where you took this.....

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Donna. I wanted it to be about something other than food, but I'm not sure I did... jack
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Mouthwatering for sure. Very well imaged and I am in for the glass of wine :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/21/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Karen... Jack
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:33:00 PM
    I think this will do well Jack, a masterful depiction.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/19/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the good words, Richard.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:51:00 AM
    A superb tanka..Excellent one!!!Have a gr8 wk end

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/19/2013 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Charmaine, and the same for you... Jack
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:10:00 AM
    very sensual, I like this a lot! you have cleverly combined salty and sweet, and I love "the shallows of our mouths"...sent you soup mail...

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 1:20:00 AM
    Lovely expressions, ,good luck in the contest,