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A Paranoid Love

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A Paranoid Love

My nervous system has glitches
Daily fearing your love ditches
Me for someone over time
Losing what's always been mine
Incapable of never seeing
You will stop your heart from fleeing
Into someone else's arms
Mesmerized by all their charms
You assure me day and night
There is no need for my fright
Your tender voice and warm breath
Sends chills all across my neck
As you kiss me whispering
Sweetheart please start listening
When you hear my I love you's 
You can bet they are so true
There's only one love for me
The only one my heart will see

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Again, another sweet and heartfelt piece. Really enjoyed the sentiments you are conveying. Very-well expressed <3

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Robin a very well crafted piece of work, though I think it is interesting that all of the comments are from males? ...David

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:07:00 AM

    Beautiful poem of assurance in love. May God help you all the time. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 3:35:00 AM

    This is exactly how I am. I really love this one, Robin. Your pieces oftentimes feel that they were written for me and that's a sign of a great writer. I don't know if I can say that whenever I'm reading your work, I can put myself in your shoes and see and feel the circumstances of a particular poem such as this but that's how I'm feeling. It's uniquely Robin. :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/24/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love what Jake just said. You write pieces that are universally understood and relatable, which I also think is a mark of excellence :)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:58:00 PM

    Love the lines "When you hear my I love you's you can bet they are so true". That's something to hold on to.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:01:00 PM

    A great message of trust in this. A wonderful tale of love =)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:40:00 PM

    Hi Robin, A most sensual write from you.. Ken