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paradise dreams

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paradise dreams

Melting in 
the deepest chambers 
dreamily awakening 
Sweet like 
cotton candy 
a gentle strumming 
of one soul 

Wishing away 
With the fairies 
On the scent of 
Her heavenly musk 
floating feelings 


Sweet vanilla 
undertones dance 
With the top coats 
of his charm 
warm in 
breaths depth 

Dreaming away 
With the blazon one 
skipping heartbeats 
drowning within emotion 
On the trail of 
His heavenly pine 
paradise dreams


Written by: Liam * Mystic

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:27:00 AM
    sweet and enchanting poem. makes me dream and wish away with the fairies:) beautiful as ever.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:01:00 AM
    Ow to wish away with the faries..Who wouldn t want that..Vanilla is one of my favourite scents so delicate..On the trail his of his heavenly pine..Outstanding flowing versves from a lovely couple of the soup.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Fabulous...you guys really rock together!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:51:00 AM
    - A heavenly sweet dream Liam! - Have a beautiful and romantic weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)