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SKY'S STAGE SHOW

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SKY'S STAGE SHOW

                                          BEFORE STAGE SHOW IS ON IN SKY

                                                 hanging blue stage show 
                                                covering white silky screen 
                                                     stars ready behind 


                                             DANCING STAGE SHOW IS ON

                                                    lifting screen slowly
                                          twinkling dance of stars on stage 
                                                       audiences joy


                                         NEXT- TRAGEDY STAGE SHOW IS ON

                                                   sudden load shedding 
                                             dark villain starts thundering 
                                                    challenging with light


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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Bi; You have put on a beautiful show for us here with this poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/20/2013 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks......,.......a lot.......... my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 2:26:00 AM

    oooh, neat, thunder comes in as the tragic one!!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/19/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks......,.......a lot.......... my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 1:32:00 AM

    Lovely Three acts tragedy, creative, Devnath

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/19/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks......,.......a lot.......... my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Bl a great work well captured enjoyed Shadow x smile

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/19/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks......,.......a lot.......... my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:25:00 PM

    This is absolutely lovely, BL...I really found the imagery wonderful! Great job!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/19/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks......,.......a lot.......... my friend. Loved always, bl