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  1. Date: 12/7/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Becca, I Keep coming back! The Battle Inside Me, is pure poetic sagacity!!...Shall we dance?

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:44:00 AM
    perfect write

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Becca This is a powerful and deep write. Full of questions which keeps the reader intrigued from beginning to end. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Bumpy Road poem. It is appreciated

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:22:00 AM
    I love your deep's as if you're sitting by an open window cuddled up in a blanket, gazing out at natures best while painting art with your pen!! :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:44:00 PM
    My dearest, Becca, I see you have turned to a philosopher! Wonderful introspective thinking. Deep questions which means you already have halve of the answers! I loved it! If you have time read my HARMONY. Thank you! Great work here. Bravo!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Yep, once again, you got it. Thanks for sharing you with all of us. Allan

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:20:00 PM
    I agree with PJ Becca....think we all have these battles expressed it so your new avatar...goes so nicely with the poem....:-)

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Wow... this is definitely going into my favorites. I believe we all have this battle within us. I know I could relate to this poem. Good job.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Amazing expression filled with all of the conflicts and dancing to our selfish needs. Just simply amazing and eloquent writing dear Becca.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Hi dear..Im going to listen to you..Im going to fix some lines in my poem 'It seems to me like yesterday'and hopefully enter it and maybe im going to pick one for Giorgio s since its about gothic or romantic..We ll see : ).Ow gee i dnt know why i get butterflies even speaking about contests..Tnks sweetie for letting me know and helping me go for it :) big hug

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:25:00 AM
    You give voice to the voiceless my beloved poet friend. I love this poem sweet Becca. Finally my vacation time is here so expect more than just this visit.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:03:00 PM
    Relevant questions for some of us. But I agree leave well enough alone.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:20:00 PM
    You speak for many of us, at least you do for me, I too question this many a time dear friend, maybe that is what makes this poem so endearing to me, we are only human love, we do our best, is all he asks of us, in the end, our heart will choose for us, xxx

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Hey Becca, Just stopped by to say hello and read your newest write..Glad I did as I enjoyed this one.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Hi Becca, hope you are enjoying the weekend. I finished my Watch poem.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:32:00 AM
    amazing poetry, and the writing of this says all, you will win the battle no doubt about that....

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Cont.poem.We all ask and weigh these questions rambling in your mind sweet Becca.Tnks for expressing so many times the same thoughts i think yet wont express through words.Your verse is so vivid dear.How are you..Always a comfort in reading your words..Hugs

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:21:00 AM
    Doctors..nutritionists.always say what we love to eat most is always best not to eat ,usually the least healthy..Mothers..teachers always give the same advice..We must study not play but who loves to study more than play.Our conscience says the same..The most fun tempting things n life taste better than the sour daily boring routine but in the end the tempting adventure will always become another routine..So its tough choices some of which not worth the risk.A thought profound

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:10:00 AM
    Awww dear sweet Rebecca! I truly hope and pray you will know the answers one day and find internal peace. You have a sweet loving nature... you are loved here on the Soup! Big warm hugs my dear Rebecca! Love, Jack xoxoxox

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Ok Becca. Allow me to answer each stanza individually. Yes. Yes. Yes. YES!!! Maybe. That being said, I think we all question these things. Maybe not so poetically but certainly as deeply. Most just don't know how to ask. This was a thought provoking and entertaining poem. The kind that I most enjoy. Good job and thanks for sharing the thought. Rockman :-)