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  1. Date: 5/5/2014 9:54:00 AM
    Thought provoking, though never caused me to question my salvation. Cryptically received and evaluated, this write is right on...... well done, my friend....... Jake

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    Date: 5/5/2014 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, John. This was my reaction to certain things I heard from the TV. I really am not seeing the image of the loving God in any religious sect. It's always conditional hence this poem's birth. I believe that the true God exists and the real sin of man is demonizing him. :)