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Romance the Chance

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Romance the Chance

This coldness still, untrue; unreal 
Consumed by doubt, more cracks in the wall -
For certain I loath all that I feel 
(Lost in the Beauty of my fateful fall) 
Dry of words, and void of strength, 
I try and save my dying chance 
(I never thought I'd trek this length)
But, Lo! I dance a dead Romance...

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:09:00 PM
    Chan...you are accurate in your blogs...your poetry is natural and original! Jimbo

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I sincerely appreciate that, Jimbo; thanks for stopping by :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 3:37:00 PM
    This poem seemed to flow effortlessly from your pen. A very passionate write, and it is one that many of us can relate to. Excellent poem!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/26/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, SP! I guess "lost love" does have a certain universal appeal, but that's the only relatable line in the whole piece, I think. But thanks for dropping by <3
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 6:11:00 AM
    WOW, my friend. This is a passionate piece well crafted. I salute you Archaic. Keep up the Rhyme! Friend, JM

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/25/2013 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A thousand thanks as always, JM; thanks for popping in and for the reviews this morning :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:57:00 AM
    Excellent write. I really enjoyed this one from you friend.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/24/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always look forward to your reviews, Mustapha :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Excellent verse that flows off your tongue...loved it! You are a talented poet! Julie :-)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That very sweet of you to say; thanks for the compliments and for making me smile, Julie :)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:00:00 PM
    HEY !!! This is a sad and truthful write about love and the heartache of it. Nice job my friend Hugs

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    Date: 10/23/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Robin! :)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:02:00 PM
    A very realistic perspective of love and angst. It inspired me to write some lines. (Check your last line again, something's off)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/19/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ARGH! Thank you for spotting that. I'm usually a careful proof-reader, but when I know a line in my head, I will hear it and not read it. <3